Reviews of Mitochondria of the Human World

Looking forward to the new version. So far the first chapter does seems better than the old novel. Hopefully it continues that way (and the MC remains a bit more ruthless compared to the old novel). Good luck to the author 👍. Can't wait to read the rest of the story, will give an update on the review after a few more chapters are released!

First one was way better man, I mean way better. I liked alien MC more than human MC, every novel is with the same human moralfag MC, it's just boring dude, nothing new here, same principles, same philosophy, same everything. This completely feels like watching another Japanese anime series with beta male lead getting cucked by strong characters whole series. "Character development" my ass, lol. Idk how can someone go from the masterpiece like previous work to this ****. When I heard you wanted to do a rewrite I thought it would be completely erasing MC unnecessary human emotions and connections and going full alien, instead, you did this. Smh. You must've listened to other retarded beta readers with: 'Muh too OP', 'Muh too evil'' MC. If they're your target audience then go for it, good luck.

This is probably one of the best original novel i read. I hope this novel will climb the rank so more people will read this gem. ,............sjsvsoxveocbsoshsodbdoevcosbcoebdksvdosbdkdjsjsoshdkdbe dohegeoyeotetietkskttiejtsigdykejgeykekydykdkydykdykdyidyksktsyisitsiydiysyidyisiydyidiydiydtisitsitstksitsitsitsy

compared to the axed version, this one seems to flow better and the world building is really smooth, I wonder when will the s*x scenes roll in, hopefully, the author is really good at those .

Great future work, keep it up. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Hmmmmm still that same tittle....*sigh* Looking forward to it Best of luck Author 140 characters rip........................,................................................m.mmmmm..m..............

I don't know about others comment but IMHO, this version of MHW is much better. I've read all his chap is was thinking, I'm lucky to not believe in those negative comments that tried to degrade this book. This is a very good work, and continue to do better. I had you in my collection and looking forward to more chaps. Please do a mass release?

This author is very creative. The main character is unique, the lower power characters and powers are creative, and the action is intense and fleshed out without being wordy. The only real concerns are a) the more powerful characters haven't been shown to be as creative and seem to be genericly powerful, and b) I can't yet get a feel for where the story is headed. However, they're minor concerns, and will likely be addressed in the future. It's still early and we haven't seen much of the powerful characters yet.

5! 5! 5! 5! 4! Absolutely awesome! You did a fabulous job making the MC feel true to life! From the beginning I loved the premise of a reverse-isekai story, it was so refreshing. You have a great knack for pacing, you were very good at explaining what was needed, just enough to evoke imagery but not so much it was exhausting, plus your chapters are consistent and consistently long. Your grasp of the english language is great! If there was anything at all I would say it would be to take a little bit of time to build the setting and world around the MC. However i expect that stuff would happen naturally as the story progresses. Ive added your story to my library, and if I wasnt working on my own novel I would definitely vote for you. I can honestly say this is one of the best originals I have seen in terms of skill of writing.

Everything about this book is good, I just love it. I usually try and write detailed reviews but that's all I really have to say. Power balance feels good, world lore is awesome. MC is really interesting, everything is awesome and I love that, I hope to see the updates continue as they have been, but I also think that the author should push out updates to much as it may lead to writer's block and disinterest in the story. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see more.

It is way better than the last one as it goes into detail and it describes his feeling and emotions. It is also far more readable How many words are left

This is truly the best original novel on the site. I love how the MC is not just a mindless drone that gets stronger for the he'll of it. He evolves as a person while getting stronger, which is a nice change of pace from those mindless MC 's that do nothing but 'get gud '.

I hope that you can still keep the mc's interaction with the ao clan I rlly liked that part in the previous story..............................................................

Writing quality is good, Stability of updates is great! , This is a gem. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

The reading was a pleasant one as the content is written beautifully with a smooth grammar / punctuation. The world itself seems to be alive as it has a clearly planned power progression throughout the story, with the mc having brain and not relying fully on plot armor to go through it. Interaction are done with a successful attempt in conveying the emotion of the character to the reader. Overall a solid novel to stockpile or read as it goes.

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A great story the first time and the rewrite has fix some blurring problems later in the chapter. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ why do we need 140 words to post!

Quality of this new version has improved a lot when compared to the previous book. It is much more detailed and even the fight scenes are good and not rushed through

Before this version came out I was already a fan of authors work! This newer edited version has its quality increased 10x, the story, character development and world are all top quality. Can’t wait to dive deeper as it progresses

Has a great start and it only becomes more interesting. Althoigh it lacks logic like alot of logic Just writing to reach 140 characters lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalalalalslalalallalalalallalalalalallalalalalalLalalallalal