Dream_blue98
This story has potential. The FL is a kind and smart princess. I like novels with strong female leads and I have my fingers crossed that Silja doesn't turn into an enamored flimsy person who melts whenever ML gets into visual range just because he is handsome. The ML seems to be coldhearted and manipulative, and I hope that Silja stays clearheaded and gives him some hard time. π The novel has mystery and magic and I can't wait to see what will happen next. The author gives an advance warning that English is not her first language, and it shows. However, the errors are not very bad and they didn't stop me from understanding what's going on. An editor or the help of some proofreading tool (like Grammarly) will definitely raise the level of readability and it will be easier to enjoy the ride. Overall, I recommend this novel to readers who love fantasy. π
[Reviewed on: 12-10-2021] [Reading status: 11 chapters] β Strength: - A considerate and 'everyone's loved' sister and daughter FL is waiting for you to be saved. Well, she's not exactly a white lotus since I'm betting on her strong personality (she listens to her heart and observes things) I think and I believe she will use her brain too I near future. - The plotline is hate-to-love relationship, however the tension of the atmosphere which the author has created can be imagined effortlessly. - The major strong factor is the emphasis on every character's emotions and thoughts. Benjamin is protective, while the parents are mysterious yet trying their best to keep the daughter safe. Apart from Silja, the rest characters revolving around her are also fully developed, even her maid. - The reader gets immersed in the tension created from chapter 3 and can predict the potential plotline but I'm counting on the author for deviation. (ps, the title of the work) - What caught my attention was the chapter one and mirror, owff~ - The male lead is your renowned playboy, abusive, probably torn emotionally and gives a 'fix me' vibe. But let's hope the fl wwil not bow down to him. - Despite English being author's 3rd language the narration is highly readable. β Weakness: - There's no distinction between the notes & chapter content in 6th 6nd 8th chapter, which caused confusion and disrupts the flow. [Overall remarks: Conspiracy filled romance with round characters. Except supernatural and action. Serious tone and requires focus.]
lt's 5* for me even in spite of typos here and there. lt's a book l picked to read in daily recommendation only for 200 points but couldn't drop l love it. A refreshing book after reading so many transmigration novels. There's no rush, the story is growing at a steady pace but still able to arrest your attention and keep you curious at the same time. l love leads with strength, character and mysterious background, this novel gave me too, Silja and Don. l also love that l can't predict what will happen next. A novel with great potential.
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I'm on chapter 212. I upgraded my purchase privileges. I did the 5 chapters 89 coins and it was all done. But it sent me to chapter 202. So, I thought something went wrong. I went back to chapter 212 and repurchased. I didn't realize I was making the same purchase twice. I still ended up at Ch.202 for some reason. I've paid for 10 chapters now and short 180 coins. I contacted Webnovel. Webnovel said the privileges purchaces work how the author decides. Confused please help.
I just ran across this book and read it out of boredom but I didn't realize that I will be glued at reading it and I am looking forward to more chapters. I cannot say that it's sophisticatedly written however as a normal reader I find it really good. The words in the novel are simple which is easy to understand that I don't need to go to my dictionary to look up certain words to understand them I just keep on reading from one chapter to another. I highly recommend this one. Hope this won't be dropped.
This novel is so fresh and amazing. If you read it, you won't regret it. The character progression and development is well paced. The novel progression is also paced in a way that makes sense and has good rhythm. There are minor grammatical errors but it doesn't take away from the angst and excitement of this novel. I can't wait to see what happens next!
I was hooked after a few chapters and havenβt even considered stopping. I just finished all current chapters (through 144) with no regrets, and Iβm eager for each new update. Iβd definitely recommend this read! Check out this bookβs tags, theyβre pretty accurate. (Except it needs a romance tag, too!) I have definitely been I giggling, snickering, and thoroughly frustrated (when the story calls for it), and I credit that to the authorβs story telling. Itβs not trashyβpretty clean so far, actuallyβ and I like it that way. Anyone can write trash, but Iβm more interested in an author convincing me that two people are actually in love. Itβs a slow burn, but I think thatβs needed when you have two characters at odds from the beginning. I looove the way they interact, though! In fact, I like all the characters, and you get quite a variety. I donβt think this is a slow start, but if you want instant action, youβll need to stick with it for a couple chapters as the author sets the scene, introduces more characters (instead of dumping them on you all at once), and gets the plot moving. But you wonβt be disappointed. I donβt feel like any of the chapters were wasted, they all served a purpose in building the story for an enjoyable read. There are some typing/grammatical errors, but it doesnβt really detract for me. The updates are very regular, and the author always gives bonus chapters for meeting goals. If you like being in contact with an author, I think she does a good job of responding to comments she clarifying any questions. Thank you for a great book in my library! π§‘