Reviews of Mistress Of Dimension

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It's good but you could write story development slower it's a little too fast. too little Character background and too much training. literary too little Dialogue

It's not that bad, honestly, it's just that Eileen's character is quite forced and really unrealistic. Why would a 400+ old archewitch work for some militaristic group? If she's as strong or as it has been implied, stronger than her sister why would she held bsck so much? Anyways, the character is inconsistent and full of flaws. The fanfic is still interesting though.

Great story and character too so please don't forget to put more chapters in the future . Also can you list all the world's that she travel in the future and can she a a harem of sexy women too .