I'm liking the book so far, the plot is nice and the characters are well taken care of. The Author is trying his best to bring the best outta his book and I can't help but applaud him. Keep up the work author and don't slack off
After reading only one chapter i fall in love with this novel amazing character and wonderful story i will highly recommend it to u guys to stick with this novel and u will love it waiting eagerly for the new chapter keep it bro
I love π your story title. It is a different idea. And cover of your book is extraordinary. Your plot is strong. Keep it up waiting for next. [img=update]
It is still too early to give a complete review. But the writing quality is good, the world is well created and the characters have a good personality.
WQ: 3/5, lots of small flow and grammar errors. SOU: 4/5, seems good. SD: Decent, not 2 slow or fast. CD: Interesting, not 2 cliches. WB: 5/5, new and interesting.
The writing quality is so good , and the story is also amazing it , I wish I can reach this level in writing , good job ππ ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
The writing quality is great and the premise of the book is interesting. There are scenes where it feels like foreshadowing and I am interested with the chaotic aura of this book. Will read more
Love the originality and character development of this web novel. Creative concept thatβs written well has me reading this and eager for more.
Ouroboros is not a mythical serpent eating its own tail. A symbolism here? It represents things coming full circle or Infinity. Hmm. This is not only an interesting premise, but also a deep dive into the psyche of the MC. I think I will keep reading.
i really enjoyed reading this webnovel , the idea was different . and i really like the main charachter alexus . now after waking up as an ouroubous i think he will be a powerful one too but in the process he will be having a difficult time with that company . the story needs a love story to be complete .
I really like the concept of the story. I am hooked to this story and hope to read more of it. I hope author will continue to write. I recommend it. I hope you give it a chanceπππ₯°π₯°
A quite a new approach to a webnovel design. Intresting chapters and overall charecter design is quite good, the mark of a veteren author shines through. This book makes for an intresting read and the grammer solidifies itself through. A good, no, excellent read in my opinion.
The grammar is perfect, mate. The story is well driven and pretty unique for my taste. It's quite remarkable on how you managed to write many words within one chapter. This should be an actual book and not merely just a WebNovel story. Because it has a lot of potential. You have a lot of potential. No grammar mistakes and you should get this contracted if you're ought to make this mere hobby into a passionate profession. Cheers, mate!
Expressive and Audience captivating. This story can only go up and better from here, greatly looking forward to reading more. This is one to watch!
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
I am hooked, I cant wait for the next chapters. I useally do not read this type of book. I cant wait like i said before. I am really empressed with the discriptions.
The story is so far so good the characters look promising and really good to read keep doing the good work waiting for more from the story..
I have to be honest, I am not into this kind of storyline but I will give this one a try. It's a good story for starters and I think I will wait for the next updates since I will finished the 4 chapters in a few days.
Honestly, this is one of the best novels I have read, I hope the author will have time to continue writing! .............................................................
Demons!!! chills down my spine!!! I love Alexus. He is one of those few characters one could actually relate to. I love the author's world creation and the way he writes. Grammar is alright and it a wonderful read. Kudos! I want more!