Reviews of Mikey's other brother

Shameless writer review this is my first work so please help me with some mistakes and recommendations sincerely ~ Writer-San (keksueuiwh did ksuwrnjwj

tokyo revengers tensei(reincarnated) shinichiro doesn't die, akane doesn't die, izana will become brother, that's how good it is

Author im not trying to be rude but its way too fast paced. I mean I wanted a gang fan fic where the gang slowly gets stronger until it becomes the top gang and then when they’re older join the yakuza or something like that. Also you made the mc way too op i mean his wishes were the experience/abilities of mike tyson bruce lee muhammad ali and the strength of a gorilla and bear and then out of nowhere he somehow gets super speed and is able to dodge bullets and catch them in between two fingers there’s also a massive lack of fight scenes.

Pretty good. Mc in humans standards is much more stronger than captain america i guess. Mc cares for his new family. I wonder what will happen in the future since he is now there. He can probably solo all the gangs in one go.

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I'm helped by an automatic trafutor, so because of the bad grammar, I didn't understand almost anything about the story... a sadness.................

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Si bien la gramática no es lo mejor sigue siendo entretenido y entendible, no lo dejes caer. Good story ....................................

Im just here tu support you🌚🌚...👍👌✨ I mean, it's a good story, and I don't want it to be dropped like a Most other stories and....Yea yo can do it I support you, and I hope the rest of you support you, too. Notce: im use Google translate for this👍🌚

So far so good Hope u don't drop it ................................................................ ................................................................ ................................................................ ................................................................ ................................................................ ................................................................

all my ''reviews'' are in chapter 5 you are a blessing author and writer