Reviews of MHA: The Jade Spear God

Hello everyone, This is my first novel. I had time thinking about making an MHA fanfic but I didn't know how to make it somewhat unique so I decided to use the hardworking Izuku that other authors use and make it use a spear. Why a Spear you ask? Because it's my favorite weapon hahahahaha. I hope that I can make something that most of you like and enjoy. I would appreciate any constructive criticisms and suggestions. And don't worry I don't have plans of dropping I have plenty of chapters planned out. Thank you for your support and the time that you use reading my novel. English's not my first language so most likely I would make some mistakes so if you find them I am very sorry and I would try to improve. Mandatory 5 stars to myself. Author-san out

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The grammar is good and just has a few typos it also is really original and interesting the author makes sure to convey the characters emotions and explains the characters choices another awesome thing is that the author responds and considers the comments and even explains something that im not going to spoil because theyade a unique decision

It is beautifully written I love the story and hope to see it continue for a long time. I love the idea for Izuku's powers as well as his character. Keep up the great work.

very good story. I support you to continue writing it

Very good webnovel, sadly not my cup of tea but only because I was looking for a different type of novel, would still recommend it.