Reviews of My Hero Academia: Blue Burn Dabi
My Hero Academia: Blue Burn Dabi
Anas_Nazim
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Ah well, the tenth review is from me your shameless author. As many of you know I am in a family crisis right now. That's why low updates. But don't fear, I have a lot planned for this story. Not gonna spoil so much, but enjoy.
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First 20 chapters or so was amazing, maybe one of the best mha fanfics out there BUT I am at chapter 21 and the story just shifted massively. I really like system stories if done correctly but this just isn't it chief, what is up with this sassy omniscient system? The first 20 chapters just flowed like water but the 21st chapter I am struggling to read its painful to get through. The 'personality' of your system is abhorrent, the first thing that came to my mind when I was reading is that 'This system is the authors self-insert' if it is not your SI I applaud you for writing a really annoying personality. Yeah, so if you are new to this story you can safely read the prologue but beware after that.
Writing Quality:5 stars cause i havent seen any grammor mistakes and The words make sense. Updating stabilty: 5 stars, Stable Story Developement: The prolouge is very long so 4.5 stars World Building: 5 stars cause its MHA and we already know the world building of mha. if you have read the manga or watched the anime you should know what i am talking About.
great book so far I love how there's finally a mha/bnha fanfiction about dabi they are usually about someone being reincarnated or transmitted into someone else's body. but this one isn't keep up the good work auther-kun can't wait for more chapters to come out might write another review after 5/10 more chapters come out.
This is a must read, I enjoy reading fan fictions as they will provide a more in depth view of the world they are based in compared to the original,( though most lack this quality and focus only on the main story. ) But this story doesn’t fall into the same trope and even focuses on a character we already know in a different situation. The quality of the world building, character building, and the realist interactions deserve rating beyond the regular 5 stars. The only complaints with the quality is the common spelling / and or grammar mistakes which can be easily overlooked. One personal like for this story is the lack of harem, it is far to difficult to find fan fiction without harem these days. One personal dislike is that the system has a personality, which honestly i can overlook as it becomes less annoying in later chapters and you get used to it. Overal this is an amazing story and a must read. Author-sama please keep updating.
