1 Metal World

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The weather is so hot, As the two suns was shinning on Metal World.

There is a big forest, Within it there were a small village. The village was rule by Kim family.

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At the edge of the forest and village a seven year old young slave collecting the hot Metal iron branch which drop from Metal tree.

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Under the hot two suns, Metal tree were like hot iron. It burn seven years old boy without mercy.

But some were so happy as two rare suns were out shinning.

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This is the Metal World,

There were too many different Kind of Metal were found on the metal world.

Metal forest, metal rock were found in many place.

Metal tree were in black iron colour but not strong like iron, these were hard between wood and iron.

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That make a seven year old boy got cut on his body and bleeding while collecting metal wood.

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And people on this Metal world cultivate Sun energy.

That is the reason many were happy as Two Suns were out.

The slave boy is so thin and weak,

Normally young child slave never got this kind of job, but only him.

Kim family hate him, and they only give him less food than other slave children.

Even if he was sick, he was told to collect iron hot tree branch under the hot Suns.

He did not have anyone rely on or no one help him.

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He is so sad as a seven years old child and crying day to day.

But no one sympathy on him.

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He would like to stop working under burning suns and go under a shade.

But if he stop, they will punish him for not doing his job.

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The boy use his mouth blow the air on the branch trying to cool down a bit before he pick up.

And he pick up,

The hot tree branch burn his hand and tear coming out from hurt without knowing but he did not drop it back on the ground,

As he afraid of the Hot ground would made these branches hot again, and put it on his chest where there were many other tree branches he collected. His soft skin chest were already burn.

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His both foot were wearing Iron slipper like Japanese old slipper to reduce heat but it still burn his feet.

Wooden shoe were the best but that only for rich people and leather shoe were not for slave.

He is many times stronger than other normal children who were same as his age, that is the reason he could still a life from this harness.

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He is so sad but how could a seven year old boy know what should he do?

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A group of eight children, age around ten to fourteen walk toward near edge of forest where the young boy working.

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A boy of 12 years old lead them, His name is Kim Yu Han. A young prodigy of Kim family.

When they saw the slave boy, Moesat.(Rain drop.)

One boy pointed and say something to his leader, Kim Yu Han.

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After Kim Yu Han found Moesat,

"That good, I just finished my foundation. I will try test my power on that slave." After he said he run toward the slave boy who was collecting Metal hot branch.

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When Moesat(Rain Drop) saw Kim Yu Han rush toward him and he really scare but he does not know what to do.

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He wanted to run away,

As he know these children will come to torture him, hit him and bully him.

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But on contrary, he needed to finished his job, if not he would get more punishment.

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Stay here or run,

In both ways he would get hit.

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Moesat thought that, it is better to get hit by 12 years old than adult hit.

So he tighten his fist and sit down while holding tight his collected branches and hide his face.

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Bang

Moesat fall down on the hot ground while holding tight his collected.

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"You!! trying to guard??"

Sat down and hold firm is making the young master angry.

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Since young, The young master was favour by everyone and after he show his talent in cultivation, everyone put him on the top.

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So, he thought he could do everything he want,

If he don't like someone he break it and throw away like a cheap doll.

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He never thought other as a living thing.

Even if something annoy him even a very little, he destroy it.

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Bang Bang

Not only a punch, the kick coming in and break through Moesat defence and hit on the face.

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Moesat is just doing his jobs, and he got hit.

But as seven year old slave he never know how he could explain or telling back.

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All he could do is, Just tighten his defence and wishing for stop hitting him.

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"Hahaha, Now you know what happen if you against me."

Moesat did not against the young master but the young master thought that Moesat defence is doing against him.

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"Now I will show you what happen if against me."

BANG

ARRRR.

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Moesat flown away from the Kim Yu Han kick, and all his collected branches were flew out.

But he could not even shout from his pain.

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The one who shout is The Young prodigy Kim Yu Han.

Kim Yu Han trying to kick Moesat chest.

Where metal branches were and got hurt by his own kick.

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"You dam slave dare to hurt me, kill him."

Kim Yu Han angry because of his leg got hurt by his own kick on Moesat

And told his lackey to kill Moesat.

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All these lackey took out their metal weapons and approach toward Moesat,

Even though they were young, but in this metal world, metal weapon is usual.

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Blood were dripping down from corner of Moesat mouth and from his body but he could not care.

These people killed slave all the time, a week ago this young children group killed a young woman for against them doing sexually.

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Moesat scare and pick up metal branches for defence but after looking at the group. He decided to run.

Now he could not care for his punishment anymore as he is so scare of getting killed by them and he run into the Metal forest.

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The group stop chasing into Metal Forest but

"Chase him, kill him."

With the Master command the group of young dogs were chase after Moesat without thinking.

That made Moesat scare and running without stop.

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"Fvcking brat stop now or I will kill you."

If Moesat stop and they will kill him too.

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Arrrr,

"It hurt, hay I said stop."

In the forest, grass or bushes were everywhere and they cuts young people body who rush into them.

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Moesat got hurt too but he has been tortured since when he started understand about life.

There were not a single day without getting hurt on his body.

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So, he could not care Metal tree cutting his skin and pain that come from it.

He does not stop in his running.

He tripped and fall down,

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Someone get near him,

He is so scare so,

He stand back up and strike with iron branch at the one who get close.

The one thought that slave would never fought back and got hit.

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Arrr..

"That slave attack us, careful."

"Attack his legs!"

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Another get near and attacks Moesat legs,

Moesat jump and hit that one on the head with Metal wood branch.

Arrrr

"Hay careful, he attack us on our head, attack his hand made him lost his weapon."

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Another reach near Moesat,

Before that one trying to attack,

Moesat throw the metal wood branch to that one face.

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Arrrr,

"Hay he throw his weapon."

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When other got near him, he pick up another Hot Metal branch strike them with it.

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But all other boys who chase him were stronger and healthier than him.

While Moesat was very sick and was working under the burning suns.

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After a long chase, Moesat trip and fall down but he could not get up.

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Other could caught up with him.

"Motherfvcker, you hurt us all. I will kill you."

but they all tired too.

"STOP, don't kill him with weapon, hit him until he die."

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"Boss you are brilliant."

All kicks Moesat body until they tired and sat down.

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"Is he dead?" Kim Yu Han ask his lackey.

"He is not dead yet but he will die soon, leave him here, let beast eat him up." A lackey give good idea.

"No, I wanted to be sure he is dead." Kim Yu Han told them.

"Ok, Boss I will kill him."

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"Wait, I got a better idea. Let throw him in the bottomless pit?? I wanted to know." Kim Yu Han thought.

"Bottomless pit?" Everyone shiver.

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Everyone who try to go down into that pit and never went up again from the pit.

All who try to go down vanished like a stone which throw into the deep ocean.

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"Carry him." Kim Yu Han order other.

"Boss, it is dangerous. Better not go there."

"I said carry him. And follow me." Kim Yu Han give order.

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There were only ten feet circle opening on the ground but that pit is bottomless.

"Throw him in there."

Two boys who carry Moesat approach with scare and they afraid to get near, throw Moesat from far.

"Boss we done Let go back."

"I would like to hear the sound that body touch the ground." Kim Yu Han approach the pit and look.

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After a long wait no sound.

"Hay are you sure he drop in there."

"Boss we are sure,"

"BOSS, I heard it before, even a big rock drop it in there and no sound come out. This small boy could not give out sound."

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"OK, let go back."

Finally, they all left the place.

When they got back their home,

"Son you got hurt? Who hurt you I will kill him." Kim Seong, his father told him while looking at small scratches on his proud son.

Everyone who heard that Kim Yu Han got hurt, they all rush toward them.

"Who made young master hurt?" They ask in worry like their mother going to die.

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"I already kill that slave."

"Who is that?" Hye Jun, his mother.

"Moesat."

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"I told you don't touch him." Kim Seong got angry after he heard Moesat name and try to hit his son.

"You stop, Do you dare!" Hye Jun shout at Kim Seong so he stop.

"You know what is that boy mean!!!" Kim Seong trying to said.

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"Our son already finished body foundation stage at twelve and have bright future. And you try to compare to that slave?" Hye Jun shout at him.

"That not what I mean," Kim Seong reduce his voice.

"Hay enough, forget about that slave boy and don't mention about it anymore, My grandson finished foundation. Let celebrate tonight."

Kim Dogu, grandfather, head of the Kim family stop everything.

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In this Metal World,

People cultivate Sun energy.

First three stage plus one basic are Body foundation, Metal Forming, Metal Core forming, Metal Essence stage.

It is not easy to finished foundation before twelve years old.

Age of twelve is the best the last age of first God gift (bestowment).

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The Bestowment is to awaken the Metal power. And to get their first metal body.

There were many gate open in many areas on Metal world,

(Metal body: when people got that power, they could change into metal human form to make themselves more powerful)

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All who haven't got the Metal first power bestowment could go into the first Gate to get Metal Power.

And all who already got first Metal power could not go in.

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People could only cultivate until they finished body foundation, if they wanted to go another stage they need metal body or the first metal bestowment.

Only after that they could go to another stage, Metal Forming,

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After twelve years of age, people could still go in if they haven't got first metal power.

But they would face many more difficulties.

First gate open at every two years if someone miss it and all have to wait for another two years.

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And it is not easy to go in the gate to get the God Gift,

So, the stronger the one is the better chance to get the better God Gift,

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The metal world is fair and unfair.

God Gift is not the same for everyone,

Who get closer to the God got better God Bestowment and farthest away from the point is worst.

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All people got fair chance to get enter and get the bestowment

But not fair when the power get it.

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The People Who Try Harder got the Best GOD Gift.

This is called Trial Of God.

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After they got Metal body, their cultivation would become different.

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There were different grade in metal power gift.

With the grade different, cultivation speed is different.

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There were rumour said only one genius finished Metal forming stage with 4 years and in the legend he rule the world.

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Grade were many different in ranks,

Grade one is lowest but no one know which grade is the best.

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This is the reason,

The Strongest under twelve years old were the best for Trial of God.

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The best is to finished body foundation stage.

And this is the reason Kim Yu Han is called as prodigy.

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As one happy while someone was suffering.

Moesat was falling but he could not even move.

Only a faint conscious left,

If there were other young child in Moesat place, they were already dead before they were thrown into bottomless pit.

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Moesat still falling in the endless.

And he heard a faint young girl voice in his head.

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