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Plot is so intriguing and every chapter draws attention to detail. Amazing start and story unfolds in a very beautiful manner. I love the way Kai looks Alena as a different personality and the way it is portrayed tells you about the thought process of the author. I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story. Kudos to all the hard work 🙂
A honest review, so that it will help you. I believe if you can't take criticism then you cannot overcome your mistakes. So here I'm about to tell the truth. This book needs updates. I truely feel the initial chapters to 14th chapter were outstanding, but then we readers need more chapters. (I'm lazy as you Author, *gimme a high-five ?* The second is there are few typos but it's no problem. We will point them out for you to rectify them. Keep on writing, this book is very good. I encourge you Author.
WOW !! The BOOK has really caught my attention. First of all, I loved the plot, it's a common but very very catching for the readers who would love to read this ! That's a success as a writer, the ability to get hold of one's heart. Keep writing. I liked the descriptions given and how each scene is developed. Highly Recommended!!!🔥 Give it a try everyone. Keep updating regularly writer. ✌😇
Highly Recommended Book !!! The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . And hope that the writer will continue her awesome work and will evolve even more with time .
I loved Alena's character. i'm hoping to see more scenes with alena and kai together. i appreciate that it's a slow romance. The mysterious kai is definitely a hot topic of gossip! i mean ... how can you help it! i don't think you can! :D The characters are so sweetly written and the nice and clean narrative is so pleasant to read! Definitely on the lookout for more chapters!!!!!!! Hope you keep updating, author!
The plot is nice and calming, I like the characters and there is not even a single mistake I can point out in your novel. Your novel flows in perfect flow and everything is described in a nice and sophisticated manner. Update more regularly to gain more readers. All the best for the upcoming chapters :)