Reviews of HIATUS: The Inheritance of the 3 sannins

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Sorry but i stop here. Obviously it's not that bad as a fan fic,, but i can't bear with the fight i just witnessed. If we are in MCU, then i don't see how destroy the bald women monk/wizard i don't know what from doctor strange while he is fucking Kage speed and power, it makes no sens at all. Since he is so weak, then even as a 6 path sage he would not be able to win Thanos.

I like that the story has picked up the pace. The slow intro is hard to pull off, its easy to lose interest, I'm glad the you didn't drag it too long.

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I know the villain has darkhold but the villain is still more powered than possible. Please kill the villian fast. I know the villain has darkhold but the villain is still more powered than possible. Please kill the villian fast.

Terrible story tbh he talked about saving the world and i finally thought we were gonna get a sensible hero mc instead he lets his grandfather die howard and martha die and turns into a bootleg orochimaru author is a legitimate dimwit and I wouldnt be surprised if the reason the mc took a turn for the worst was because of all the edgelords that think theyre the main character nagging him

If you want to learn how to ruin a good story then please read this if you wanna make the mc a mob character then read this if you want to learn how to force stuff to happen due to coincidences in the story then read this shit

Fuckin mc he is like a child and his growth is just like shit and he has a dick personality **** it🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕🖕

Hello there may I ask advce from a master author such as yourself on how you are able to easily write chapters or a guide in how you wrote your novel since Im planning on writing one my self please

LoL. That cover page. Hahahaha! I wanted to do a proper review after the Thanos arc but damn that cover deserves full stars hahaha! Now if only this story's version of Thanos matches that of the cover. I highly doubt it but one can always dream.

mc e virgem ate os 30 serio o jeito que natasha e introduzida na historia deu a entender que ela ia ser um interesse amoroso mas não ela fica com barnes (soldado invernal) e o altor cria uma sena romântica inútil só pra esfregar na minha cara se o mc não ia ficar com ela não introduziria ela assim

Probably one of the best Marvel fanfiction in Webnovel. The MC is smart, and act like a normal human being that have the knowledge of the future. Instead of correcting every thing wrong, the MC put future plan ahead. He know he is not the strongest in the Marvel Universe. So instead of charging the timeline by injecting himself in the story, he acts more like a bystander by working in the shadows while working towards the end games. One cliché that I hate in most Marvel's fanfiction are that most of the MC (the reincarnated one) know how small and how insignificant they are in the whole scheme of things in Marvel Universe but acting like because they have some powers and the knowledge of the future they can act like a stupid idiot.

Writing Quality (5/5): There are mistakes, but they're mostly unnoticeable, so it doesn't really interfere with the story in any way. Stability of Updates (4/5): Good. Story Development (5/5): Pretty good so far, seeing how Ethan interacts with the different characters, and how his actions affect people's choices and how that affects the overall canon of the original universe. Character Design (5/5): Really good :P World Background (5/5): Come on, it's Marvel.

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More please!!!!! Really looking forward for more action scenes! Especially excited when the MC would be fighting Thanos and his army! Madara Style~. Keep up the Good Work Author! Your work is much appreciated.

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Hey, love your writing. Great story. Oh if you want to improve in writing, you can watch Brandon Sanderson videos. It helped me a lot. And if you improve in writing we can enjoy better writings it's a win-win situation.

Normally, this wouldn't seem to work, but the main character's ability to use their knowledge of the MCU as well as their knowledge of Naruto blends into an interesting story. The author is slowly interacting with different characters in the MCU as he works towards his goals.