Everything that is from marvel is good but we need to see how the author will make a development in the story because even if he has the 3 legendary sannins inheritance it's still the marvel world but I think with Orochimaru's intelligence he might create a kind of serum and please author don't limit yourself in earth there are other planets. Overall it's good and there's still room for improvement.
This book is just so so boring to read... i Have read to chapter 22 and nothing actually happen... had this been an priginal type novel that would be fine as there is a lot of thing to build up, But this is a godanm fanfic.. if you are trying to sleep but cant, this fanfic right here is the solution... a bunch of pointless Pov, no action. Just plain boring...
Only complaints are grammar-still okay and updating-want to read more as its dope AF. When i first started i was hesistating but as i continued it only got better and better, dont know how the author does it but i really hope he doesnt drop. Also no harem(hell yeah-flings and whatnot but it makes sense). Only question is there a discord author san?
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Sorry but i stop here. Obviously it's not that bad as a fan fic,, but i can't bear with the fight i just witnessed. If we are in MCU, then i don't see how destroy the bald women monk/wizard i don't know what from doctor strange while he is fucking Kage speed and power, it makes no sens at all. Since he is so weak, then even as a 6 path sage he would not be able to win Thanos.