the grammar is not good but readable. you can try using free grammar.ly or google translate but do it sentence by sentence to make it better. even though you want to make original, try a little more reference so reader can relate
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This novel is amazing. The only problem is the English associated with it. If this had an editor, I have no doubt it would be in the top 30.
The English make it confusing to read sometimes, but with enough dedication. Everything is possible.
This is lookin really good.
Cant wait for more.This is lookin really good.
Cant wait for more.
This is lookin really good.
Cant wait for more.
Please continue writing more chapters.