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Reviews of Master of the Omnitrix

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Master of the Omnitrix

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Kaito_Uzumaki
Kaito_UzumakiLv4Kaito_Uzumaki

Love this fic. I will love it even more if you pair Gwen with Ben. I've check it ****** is not wrong(Not!) if your cousins. People do it all the time. It's fune really honest!

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Deathlock
DeathlockLv3Deathlock

What the **** is this ..? Everything is just copy and paste . What is the use of the knowledge of previous world when you do nothing but just fellow the original story . Add "Butterfly" effect, more and something new .

Red_Roman
Red_RomanLv12Red_Roman

What.The.Actual.Fuck is wrong with this novel...I mean it starts off with an interesting premise then with CH8&9 it pisses it away and becomes a less interesting rehash of cannon. It's always sad to see such great potential thrown to the fucking dogs.

Bothstar
BothstarLv4Bothstar

hello, i have a request, please add more descriptions to the characters, i guarantee most people don't remember the shapes of the aliens, villains are some minor percentages, except some aliens that never went out of our head eg alien X, four arms, echo echo, chill, good, I hope it meets my request

MatrixPrime
MatrixPrimeLv12MatrixPrime

AWSOME Story! I hope you can continue, though may I give a suggestion? Try to include more character building. you have tons of fight scenes and decent amount of world building but not enough character building. With this being a fanfic and with a completely different version of ben with some thing similar I think you should add some things to show how different they are. Another thing, With bens upgrades aliens maybe you should add more detail about how they now look when he brings them out and also make the fights for minor and some major villains easier! The last thing is more of a question. will we have Incest? and will we have multiple lovers?(Just 2 - 3 at most)P.S will their be romance?

illegal_incognito
illegal_incognitoLv14illegal_incognito

it started out good but went downhill soon after, confusing development and the mc aint showing how smart he is or how he controls the the world now, he did not fully unleashed the omnitrix potential and was beaten by his enemies easily, he should be near unstoppable for being a transmigrator and knowing the ben 10 universe

AmpJ789
AmpJ789AuthorAmpJ789

Yes , I'm shameless and self confident enough to review myself with a high amount of stars for the story. I honestly relieved that everyone likes this story as much as I do and reads it .

Sorria
SorriaLv4Sorria

The history is amazing, your grammar, not so much. You don't tell us what is happening like: Ben took a shower and told Max he would stay in his lab. No, you should use quotes "" dialogue to tell your readers what is happening like. Ben walked towards the bathroom and opened the door, before entering he turned his head towards his grandpa and said. "Hey grandpa, I'll stay in my lab for the rest of the day after taking a shower." Not only that but you constantly stick words together. And lastly, you change the Pov too much Don't use YOU to refer to a character, I'm not Kevin, I'm not Ben, I'm a reader, stick using. Resuming everything, your history is honestly incredible but the grammar puts much of that down.

skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv13skulputulurubug

Author needs to fix the random first person second person third person pov, you start with I, then go your then go Ben... the intro starts out nice smart athletic mc.. then he made a company with grandpa max and become rich... but stuck to Canon cause he's afraid of the butterfly effect? Should've skipped those if you were sticking to Canon and just described the minor changes he made...

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1GodOfLight

Everything is just copy and paste . What is the use of the knowledge of previous world when you do nothing but just fellow the original story . Add "Butterfly" effect, more and something new .

ALazyReader
ALazyReaderLv4ALazyReader

It's just a rehash of Ben 10 canon with forced plot. Not worth reading, so don't waste your time and just watch the show.

Westers
WestersLv4Westers

I have read many different fanfictions of Ben 10 but most of them come in a way that cripple the essence of the original but this fanfictions is actually really good.

GrandChase_Fan
GrandChase_FanLv5GrandChase_Fan

I love the story but I'm too lazy to make a genuine review sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Kyl_Grace
Kyl_GraceLv4Kyl_Grace

This is by far the best ben 10 fanfiction that I've been able to find. Please for the love of God don't drop this fic. Also if you could add a picture of how the aliens look, that would be awesome 👌

AlexPe
AlexPeLv2AlexPe

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AlexPe
AlexPeLv2AlexPe

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Diogo_Sanatna
Diogo_SanatnaLv4Diogo_Sanatna

I loved this novel. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, awesome character and backstory development and spectacular story development and fantastic stability and cohesion update

Diogo_Sanatna
Diogo_SanatnaLv4Diogo_Sanatna

this is not a rating on this novel and only get exp so ignore this comment ................................... ........................................................ ........................................................ ..........................

Diogo_Sanatna
Diogo_SanatnaLv4Diogo_Sanatna

this is not a rating on this novel and just get exp so ignore this comment................................. ........................................................ ........................................................ ..........................

storm_xt
storm_xtLv1storm_xt

It's amazing and well thought out the plot so far is good and pls do not drop it author ....................................................