Hello, author here. First of, thank you for taking your time and reading the novel. Please don't hesitate to call me out on my errors especially in grammar and inconsistencies in the story. I have designed the story based on the numerous japanese dungeon-type novels I have read, and I wanted to incorporate some western and southeast asian customs in the story. Hopefully, the character development is not going to be bland, but based on the hero, sudden changes *may* occur in his actions and personality. This is short story, hopefully spanning 200 - 300 chapters only. Word count is quite low, so no worries!
It was a pretty good novel actually. I was lucky to read all the chapters before they were taken down. The author said it is his regret, I wish my life regrets were as mild as this lol. I wish the author would bring back this but even if he doesn't I will be reading his future novels and supporting him with my stones
Full pledged 5* book, must must read great story, stable release, mc is very stable, world is also very well made. The whole premise of the story is rather great with plenty of possible branches. The writting is also really good and i have to say even better than most premium novels out there. Pick this up peeps.
Sorry to hear about you dropping. I really enjoyed what I read of it though. Don't see it as a regret, of you ever decide to continue it and are stuck on where to restart then here are my thoughts; don't car a about what people say, empty your thought on where you wanted to go and with those that persist, just write. Even of it's half a pargraph a week and once it's done spending more time revising because you dont like how you wrote the start, just keep it going even if it's written in your spare time to distract you. I fall like it could've held a good spot even if it dragged on as you wrote well. The problem is the lack of time up meaning a lack of attention and the fact that some people won't even read it it isn't 200+ chapters for their own reasons.
I'll only say that the story is well written and decent enough. It has a perfect pace where it is not slow nor fast. The MC is overpowered immedeately within the first arc. The updates arent stable but still tolerable enough compared to other amateurs who releases chapters whenever they want. What really grinds my gear is that this author is inspired by a rotten, self-centered, money grabber author. Effing Baisiwa lol. Naming your 2 characters as Bai and Siwa lol. I hate that lying opportunist KUNT. Manipulating his fans by appearing as arrogant and savage by attacking his co-authors because they criticize how he effin treat his fans who only wants that Baisiwa holds onto his promises lol. He proceeds to call his work as HOBBY whereas he expects his readers to pay for his work lol.
Hello! Soooo... this is my first review in qidian \(`• o•')/ and so far I am really lovinf this story,the plot,the character just everytging :) but I wish the author will be able to post daily but I can understand where he or she ("^×^) is coming from but all in all everything is great and love the darkening of the character 😈 hehe. Also I wish his second job or last job is just desaster,( sorry if the spelling was wrong) mage where he casts tornadoes,floods,earthquakesor like meteors :) . thank you author for giving me another story to read :)
Please email the chapters if you still have them to me so I can read them I hadn't yet given the novel a read yet and intended to start today(had it in my library for awhile) only to discover you have decided to stop. Which is rather unfortunate as I really enjoyed the summary and was waiting for a sufficient surplus of chapters before starting and you should never regret your creations you gave them life and they appreciate that. My email is firstname.lastname@example.org thank you in advance if you decide to share it with this humble reader.
this is one of my favorite stories so far. so far the story line is great. character build up is great as well. story progress is good i just hope there would be more chapters by this time. there is an old saying in my country for the chapters "mabuti na patay wag lang bitin". literally meaning better dead than lacking
Thank you for this wonderful novel, I am hoping for stable updates and fun dungeon master wars in the future. This is the first novel i read in this kind of genre, well mostly of this sort of novel centers to adventurers, but THIS IS MORE EXCITING!! Having Dungeon Masters instead of adventurers being the MC, makes my nerves wanting for more
I love this type of novel where the main protagonist it not a arrogant foolish idiot that is hung up on Justice he acts how wants and does what he want but got one thing to say he is a dungeon master i mean they are my fav type of main protagonist it is he rules over monters let us see what it is like foe them