Reviews of Marvel With Zanpakutou

It’s a great idea, just a translation issue for me. When a story is set in America it should have the American gang names for example or more American speech. In the uk we don’t say things like ‘call me daddy’ or use ridiculous sounding gang names, well they are still weird names but nothing like ‘heavenly death defying immortal dragon’. It sounds like a cultivation novel when it shouldn’t.

Finally!!!!..... A beach element in marvel, I'm so excited.

Meh....... like translate Death Lord back to shinigami.... it sounds stupid af.. Edge lord lvl is over 9000 in this one...............................

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anime fanfic in chinese writing style are wrong!!! its really uncomfortable to read it... and the naming sense is so wrong... it is if everyone is a weeabo... the idea is nice but i like my braincells more

Well, I like the novel, the only problem is the classical Chinese writing that ruins the whole plot... to explain myself better it would be the Chinese examples of, courting death, or classic things of Chinese culture, like lengthening the chapter with unnecessary verbiage... for Chinese authors, don't forget that the world has many countries and cultures.

More chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It is impossible to read because the logic of what is happening eludes me. The style of writing "Chinese novels" I came to this site running away from them, but they even got here.

the story has a lot of potential but also a lot of holes. please use the term "shinigami" rather than death god. it is kind of out of place. he must find a way to to make a god of death "shinigami" without resorting in killing them. by having the condition of them being killed, it will be almost predictable who will be a shinigami. my prediction of those who will be shinigami are daredevil luke cage jessica jones iron fist hawk eye black widow elektra moon knight quick silver basically anyone who wields a weapon, who doesn't have crazy regeneration and at the B-list will become a shinigami

based on 5 chapters it is readable, better than it's mtl version. rest i will rate again after more chapters .

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its a decent story with a fun concept but there are a few flaws. MOST of the dialogue is the MC spouting nonsense lies and the other characters easily believing him, he has multiple templates to change appearances to help his lies. he explains why he lies but it makes most of what you read pointless to the actual development of the story. the marvel characters he has join him lose any original personality they had and become slav.. loyal companions. Jessica is an albedo type. if you don't mind that then its not bad to read. oh yeah, you'll want to skip the chapter where he lies to the ancient one. its so poorly written and the lies used so bad that it'll make you question reading further.

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Badly translated, Op Mc, It literally tells the ending in the summary. It is just a generic protagonist with a cheat sytem based on bleach, there ya go that is the entire depth of the story.Wouldn't recommend spend your time reading something else.

i couldnt get past 5 chapters, the grammar is terrible, the kind of bad as if you put a Chinese novel through Google translate and you don't edit it

why I did this is because seriously The Mc should had learnt mystic art from ancient one because it helpful to him . .. .plus mirror dimension could be used in fight instead of fighting like some foolish minotaur who want he fight or battle to be seen he could had played it cautious that why I stopped at chapter 44 because he wanted to keep a low profile but blow it up I seriously regretted downloading it

Yea they kill gwen and turned her hallow yea plus it feels like am read Chinese novels again it had potential but the whole Chinese names is a turn off. Killing gwen was a stupid idea not gonna lie a lot of people love are character then you make it worse by turning are hallow but Frank Castle is alive that is more than enough evidence that is a failed project

A big mess with an op mc and lot of plot holes. ............................................................................................................................................

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Just finished reading till the latest chapter. So far I have enjoyed it greatly. The only thing I recommend you improve on is the grammar and writing. Its sometimes confusing if he is thinking about or saying the words since you sometimes forget the " not to mention you sometimes call females with male pronouns, but other than that great work. Hope to see your story develop even further and become greater~!