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Great. But mc too op, even though you just said that you weren't going to do an op mc. H H
Good Story and great writing. But way to much info dump from my point of view. Less info dump and more story development would be great. I know the story is on hiatus at the time of writing this review but I hope you continue it.
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When I first read this story I very much enjoyed it . then when you had to redo the story again I still enjoyed it unfortunately when I went to read the next update all the chapters seem to be deleted .I hope to see this story back up in webnovel soon .best of luck whatever happensđđđ
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the novel is good read to pass time, but it can still be improved and the characters could be flesh out a bit more, i like the story but this is the highest rating i could give, i don't want to be too bias.
Great story author. Really liking it. Please update more. Great story author. Really liking it. Please update more. Great story author. Really liking it. Please update more.
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