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This story is a fairly good one that I won’t mind following. The problems it has is in grammar, spelling, and the flow of the story. There are numerous occasions where the POV seems to fluctuate between first and third with the occasional second person story telling. There are also an enormous amount of mistakes when it comes to gender, constantly switching between calling characters he him etc.. only to switch to her. Worth a read for sure but the quality is simply awful to the point some paragraphs will be total nonsense that is impossible to follow.
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I like it, and it is more than enough for you to give it a try. I mean, i have a pretty good taste and this story is more than decent. So stop being a dumbass and go read it, if you like then congratulations, you have a good taste, if not then **** off, i don’t give a **** about what you think ! And this my friends is how you do something nice while acting like a complete asshole. in other words, being a tsundere ;)
the beginning was good. but the more chapters, the worse it gets. the main character is henpecked and just a sucker. Makes money, built an empire. But lost everything because of some ***** who decided that she is the smartest. I can’t say anything about grammar (anyway saw a lot of complains about it), because I do not know English and use a translator.