Reviews of Marvel: Mortal Ascension

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Glad to see you writing another story and it is another great one. You have a knack for writing stories that blur the line of what I think is possible and impossible, and they keep me wanting to know more. Looking forward to losing myself in this story too.

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This is an amazing story that fuses what is very very old like marvel fan fictions and New like DC and Marvel and creates a Thic and amazing story that I only found that the writing quality could use some work but

great start author keep it going!! i like how there are so many comic elements and not just MCU which is a trend right now in Fanfics. Keep it up!! hope u dont drop it

welcome back :) loved your epoch story can't wait for this one[img=recommend] ......................................................................................

The story is far to short and slow paced to be any decent and the author doesn’t do himself any favors with the dc and marvel mix. Pretty sure they only did it for Diana to be his partner. Other then that it’s stale

The story is far to slow paced and to short for the story to be any good. The author decided to do both marvel and dc which honestly is not a great idea ever unless it’s done well which here it’s not the best.

Honestly, The first 20 chapters were pretty decent. I enjoyed my read up until then but.. Soon after? I just couldn't get back into the story the moment time travel was introduced. Not a fan of it, I suppose. I only made it roughly to chapter 29, unfortunate as I did enjoy the story up until this point. The author has some work to do with descriptive writing but otherwise, things are fine. The battle scene's are mostly bland, truth be told, but it gets the job done. Overall rating, I'd Say my total score is accurate! If you don't mind time travel in anyway, Give this a read!

Here we go again. Another unique and interesting fan-fic. I like this piece a lot. Start of book wasn’t cringe or embarrassing. Romance of story was fast paced and main female interest wasn’t obsessive or clingy. On other side, I didn’t like some vague terms. We all know she wasn’t virgin based on DC movie, but then author mentioned things like “had fun with Thor”. Power system was awesome. I like cultivation system and in this case it was simple system. I don’t find any complicated realms of power or weird chinese half-translated words. Don’t worry this isn’t typical xianxia where character found ancient/primordial/heaven-defying cultivation method. Even that typical mini-hades arc is nice concluded. So thanks for great work Mr. Author.

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Droped😭 Why. .? It was soo good. Why drop😭😭😭😭