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So first of all, I only read about 4 chapters but I'm sure that this is already enough. I think this review is necessary, so that all people who would like to see what kind of character the mc is, can decide if they want to read it or not. This story is missing some important tags. At first, I thought the story is missing the tag "Anti-Hero", but when I considered it a little bit more, it's not "Anti-Hero" the story is missing but the stronger cousin "Evil Protagonist". The mc is killing in order to grow stronger. I have no problems with that. I have a problem with the people the mc is killing. It's literally everyone. If he attacks a town he will kill all citizens. It doesn't matter if they are 1-month-old babies, children, women, innocent old people, everyone. It's a story about a person killing all people who are worth it and their relatives if it's not too much of a hassle to grow stronger. But why is he doing it? I am going to copy the exact words which were in the novel, "it was mainly because I was bored". I have been reading novels for a few years now on all kinds of websites like Webnovel, RR, WuxiaW, and private translation teams. That is the first time I've come across such a psychopathic mass-murdering mc. The reason is that typically there are tags that are warning people like me that the mc is a psychopath with no morals. That's not the case here, so I am writing this review to warn all people who like kind and neutral MCS. People who have no problem with mass-murdering baby killing merciless psychopathic protagonists who will do anything to grow stronger can ignore my review.
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got to be honest didn't really Love the story so far, BUT I am looking forward to what you do with it. this is just your startup so I want to leave judgment for after at least 10-20 chapters. but so far I would rate your story a 4.9/10 which is still pretty good start and when I read your later chapters these one you've written will mean more and bump it up ALOT more
What can I say I like this story very much a combat-oriented main character, the only thing I wish is that when it comes to hand-to-hand combat that the author would get a little bit more technical and detail oriented, not that he isn't already it's just that I would like even more! I guess an example of this would be he could say "the enemy threw a punch an gently almost as if a flowing river my fist floats forward subtly redirecting the force of the blow to the side"you know things of that nature.
You know what I think I missed some stuff with artoria, sorry, when I first read it, his interactions with her made me cringe, but I reread it and I got a better outlook, sorry about the other review man I deleted it, though I did tell you not to be offended by it, and what sick imagination? I just thought he was sexist, and kind of acting like a brute lol, anyway your story is good, keep it up, and I will be looking forward to more.
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