Marvel's Agent Belova

I like these types of MCU stories but this may sound like I want you to change the story but I just want you to think about it. 1. The mutant ability i believe that it should not be op it should be something that fits is current skill set like enhanced nerves to were he can dodge bullets but not for long. 2.The SYSTEM I believe you should make it so he can only get coins from missions and that the shop only sell information about the future plot of the world but not at a cheap price. These are the only thing I would like you to think about because I find that character development and a slow to medium strength progression is better that becoming OP to quickly and this only my opinion but stories that have the MC become to OP very fast become quite boring really quick. THINK ABOUT THESE SUGGESTIONS 🙂👌

Not bad. I guess. Writing Quality: [4/5] There isn't a lot of errors I can spot. There are a few but it isn't so bad that I couldn't read it. The scenes could be a lot more descriptive but the approach to the character is pretty good. Stability of Updates: [3/5] It's pretty stable on how many times it updates, but there was a 4-5 day wait where there weren't any chapters. Again, the author didn't give us a weekly plan or anything so I might be being a little harsh. Story Development: [5/5] It's really fast in the beginning, like the first 16 years, but it slowed down. A lot. There is two chapters of him talking to Agent Fury and Natasha. But I like it like that. It doesn't feel rushed. It might be slow, but it's always constant. Some parts are just a bit too short though. Like the action scenes with the guards. Character Design: [4/5] The character's not bad but I don't see him being very consistent. He's always changing. Maybe that's the point of being a spy though. Always changing your thoughts to react to different situations better. Think from different angles. World Background: [...] I don't really have anything to say about this one. It's the MCU world with a bit of changes. So far the MC hasn't been alone and explored the world so this might change in the future. The reason I put everything as 5 stars in the actual grading is because of some Jacka** who posted a one-star just by looking at 2 chapters. I'm trying to break even so...here I am. My real opinions are already said on the review though. All in all a 4.2 for me. But you should check it out yourself. See if you like it or not.

This was such a great story. How could you this!😭😭😭 I get it dude, real life stuff. But man this was so good, maybe write when you get some free time? You know sporadic updates, random, not all the time but sometimes?

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I love this story MC is a spy from the red room and is basically a male Black widow I was sad when I first started reading this because the author said he was going to drop but to my suprise, he continued this great story. I really look forward to where this is going and I gave this 5 stars not just because it deserves it but to show the author how much I appreciate his work.

The story started really bad, mc has no potential, mc seems to be one of those mcs of **** that has nothing to offer for the story, two disappointing chapters, a trash mc with a trash story, two chapters that did not attract the attention two readers

Pretty good book that dives in the actual insides of SPY stuff. From the thinking to the approaches to certain situations. It’s fun, I’m sure you won’t regret trying it out.

This story is pretty good but there are only so few chapters. So I will be watching and hoping the story goes in a great direction. 140 characters dhshehehudhshz

Author here... This book takes a lot of inspiration from the Boy Nobody series. Check it out. The spy stuff is all from there. The gas thing, basically every thing. Also, check out Hekate of Krypton if you have the time. The Guardian-1 I will have in future chapters is from that book.

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Good job. . .

The way the story is written is confusing. I read up until after the coffee shop, there were 2 time skips with no explanations of anything The bad reviews must be getting deleted.

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I love this story! The story building and the action 10/10.🤔🤔🤔🤔👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖