I still can't understand why this has less views and reviews. I saw some garbage novels that have more than a million with just 25 to 30 chapters. Plot is absolutely stunning, nothing like other second chance novels. It's very unique. Character development is top class, I have never seen such good character development and unique setting. Writing quality is top class. It's easy to read and pretty neat. World background is also stunning, mainly the game is unique. I like that the author tried to come up with a new game just from the inspiration of other online games. Update stability is rather slow but still three chapters a week is good enough. I hope he updates one chapter a day but I understand that he wants quality over quantity. Chapters are long enough so three chapters a week is still fine. I can't give anything that's less than 5 stars. One of the best novels in this app among 1000s of garbages. Keep up the work author.... and I want to read more of it. So please make it to 5 chapters a week😅
I've been reading webnovels for almost a decade and I must say that this is really refreshing. It obviously has some cliche tropes like all webnovels but how you introduced the side characters and the setting is quite good. More world building and some hurdles for our main character would be fantastic, though I know you try your best that we don't get a Marie sue. All in all worth reading.
So far so good. Well written novel, updates daily. Nice character, well thought, no cliché annoying thing. The MC is obviously what matters the most on a "MC centered story". Well he isn't OP, has great mentality etc... The way the sports is imagined and as such the way the world the MC will evolve in seems well thought. As of now this story seems to be slow paced ( i mean the MC won't become a legend in 50 chap) which i love. Why no 5, simply because the story isn't long enough for me to correctly judge the story development. So give it a try !
nice story with a combo of MOBA and si-fi settings but I sincerely feel like it lacks the versatility of a MOBA .....jus imagine you are playing MOBA with which 5-6 characters or you can imagine it another way like you have many characters but all of them save same abilities..then how would you feel......I am pretty much sure you will drop it playing after few matches ..or maybe not play even once .....author could have added more gene abilities or some mysterious hidden abilities ...not only to mc but to some side characters......and this novel lacks cliff hangers...dude cliffs are the main essence to keep readers tied towards to your work...you are literary running your own work.....dude make it spicier (plot-wise not in romantic terms)....your writing quality is good I appreciate for that... I have greater hopes from you...+ can't you make his sister cuter and cheerful....it always feels like talking to a robot or a sh*thead brutal and stiff girl from CN novels...u made her a girl who is probably is in **** but you are not giving her character and emotions of a ****....if you have plots for her in which she needs stiff Pokerface character....you can simply alternate b/w normal and stiff. like cheerful in front of brother but stiff in the outside world...and if you think its too late to give emotions ....just make it a plot material for character development .......(sorry for such long review and bad english)
A refreshing read if you got bored of the same type of plot again and again. Few grammar mistakes like "was-were" and "has-have" that don t really affect the story and are corrected overtime. The world background left me asking myself if the action of the entire novel will be based in the Olympus Space Station with no interactions with the rest of the world or if later the actions moves from it:D. A good read if you want something new!
This is without a doubt one of the best stories here. The writing is excellent, with rarely any grammatical errors. The story is well paced. Fast during matches, to capture the action. Slow during training and everyday life. Because the slower everyday sections there is time to sprinkle in a lot of characters that each have their own personality and don't feel like robots or cannon fodder. It also helps to prepare the bigger stage that will no doubt come. The only downside I have with this story is the very slow and inconsistent updates. If we are lucky, we get 1 chapter per week. If not we get 3 weeks of chapters that only say "This is not an update.". I really hope the author can get his stuff together, because I really want to read more of this. 4.5*/5* highly recommended.