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Not my cup of tea. ML is so weak. She infuriates me. I want Camille's story - I am much intersted to what happened to her. I was about to drop the book at ch. 3 but I thought maybe the ML will have the courage to be independent since she said that she already had enough. But then when the ML insisted on his plan FL just go with it. Ugh! But I thought it's still early to drop the book so I kept on reading to still give it a try. Maybe the story will positively develop but then the FL just forgive the ML when he apologizes as if what he did was not traumatizing at all so I dropped the book at ch. 10.
i just finished reading the whole stort.. first there are so many wrong grammar, some are not translated well. next, every chapter do not continue directly (like for example, the chap is on the br, on the next chap, another setting/ day is mentioned.. then, characters are immature, always bad mouthing each other.. that's all๐ค
You should work on your pronouns, spelling and grammar. It's frustrating how you use "it" to a character, "he/him" to a female, and she/her for male characters. Plot-wise, very inconsistent and lacks detail. Both main characters are boring and plain. There is no character development, whatsoever, and the flow of the story is somewhat fast-paced. The antagonist is not even antagonistic by far. There is no proper conflict. Overall, disappointing.
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