Alexander_Clinton
A bit early for a review, but I can already say a few things first the writing quality is top. There is changes in comparison to lewd apocalypse. SPOIL A bit disappointed by the no family but it's okay. Also something for the future of that story will that be a harem or a open relationship (if the member of the have commonly Yuri /romantic relationship between them even more if it's without the Mc I consider that as open relationship ). I personally hope you side with a harem like lewd apocalypse. In all cases that is a promising start good luck for the following work.
Not really a bad fan service. I like how the story progresses smoothly. I really want more chapters.. I actually dropped that Lewd novel due to my suspension of disbelief being shattered because ThAt writer focused just on the zombies after the first arc. It lost it’s way mid writing, and wasn’t interesting anymore. However, this fanfic has great potential to overcome that and stick with the relations being built. Good luck, author.