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Reviews of Male Immortal

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Male Immortal

Alexander_Clinton

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Supsup
SupsupLv12Supsup

A bit early for a review, but I can already say a few things first the writing quality is top. There is changes in comparison to lewd apocalypse. SPOIL A bit disappointed by the no family but it's okay. Also something for the future of that story will that be a harem or a open relationship (if the member of the have commonly Yuri /romantic relationship between them even more if it's without the Mc I consider that as open relationship ). I personally hope you side with a harem like lewd apocalypse. In all cases that is a promising start good luck for the following work.

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Witherdale
WitherdaleLv15Witherdale

Not really a bad fan service. I like how the story progresses smoothly. I really want more chapters.. I actually dropped that Lewd novel due to my suspension of disbelief being shattered because ThAt writer focused just on the zombies after the first arc. It lost it’s way mid writing, and wasn’t interesting anymore. However, this fanfic has great potential to overcome that and stick with the relations being built. Good luck, author.

Kw0z
Kw0zLv14Kw0z

I tried reading ‘Lewd Apocalypse’ once upon a time, but it was just unreadable in my opinion. The main character is constantly being r*p*d by his sister an mom, and it’s just not my cup of tea.

strange_skeleton
strange_skeletonLv4strange_skeleton

I don't know how you are going to continue with this due to the original rewritten with all it's chapters deleted but good luck ..........