Reviews of Maka Allbarn in Danmachi with Shinigami Powers

Ok so this one is definitely a little better than the other book I just finished reading and reviewing be the same author. It still has some spelling/grammar errors that need improvement, as well as some plot strengthening too because it’s going way too fast right now. Besides, I feel like I need more world info. There must’ve been some things thst happened in between chapters one and two that weren’t posted. This makes me upset and really confused on where it’s going. Please improve and I’ll see you in the comments section...