When a sickness of unknown origin destroys their home, Floris Fetcher and Alvis Era are forced to leave their old lives behind them and begin anew. Having only ever stayed in the area surrounding their isolated village in Fiorra's South Swamp, the two young boys experience a culture shock they never could have expected by being thrust into an 18th-century world and seeing things they never thought imaginable. The boys embark on a journey to find the Mages' Guild to hone their skills and begin a new life. Along the way, they encounter new friends, enemies, places, and challenges that will not only test their personal strengths but also the strength of their friendship. "Mages of the North" is a fantasy series that was originally inspired by "Naruto" and "The Elder Scrolls 4: Oblivion". It focuses heavily on character development, world-building, and exploration, while also having a bit of action and comedy in it.
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When Ayra Sylvahnna was summoned by the president of Foxerall at the bewitching hour of a stormy night, she realised it was the dreadful beginning of a dark end. When an A-rank mission entailing the capture of a vicious demon was assigned to them, Ayra Sylvahnna knew this was going to be very different from her other missions. A journey encompassing around three wizards, who find themselves amidst a deadly storm of unfathomable power, cryptic prophecies, dead kings and lost queens, fight against death itself. A chronicle of friendship, love, happiness and betrayal that revolves around three powerful and fierce-hearted wizards who each have a story to tell. || THE PICTURE IN THE COVER IS NOT MINE. ALL CREDIT GOES TO THE ORIGINAL ARTIST ||
After waking up with a vague recollection of the past, our MC finds himself as a humanoid tester in a corporation. He doesn't know who he was, or why he was there, the only thing he knew is that he has to test the humanoids sent to them or death awaits him. The only way to escape this predicament is to participate in the annual freeing of workers: Runners Survivors. Run or Be Captured. Fight or Be Killed Welcome to the Runners Survivors! Run for your life! Ready!!! Start!!!
Schemes, lies and plots. The devices people in power use to remain in their seats. Underneath of the conflict and power struggle an unknown entity is being born. They are not born of greed nor thirst for lust or even crave for avarice. They are a phantom but a shadow the country has summoned in its turmoil. Should chaos ensues shall the defenders of the land be enough in ensuring the safety of the people? A new hope rises from slumber. As chaos engulf the land and hopelessness aflict the people, will his efforts be enough?
Institute of Mental Health Management. It is one of the organisations with the most influence on the public opinion, taking second place immediately after the President. They deal with everyone who needs medical attention related to mental diseases. Their patients are not differentiated by age, gender, status, race, religion, sexuality. Only evaluations matter. River Wooldam, a former mentally ill patient himself, has climbed up to be the head of the psychiatric department after a scandal related to embezzlement came out in the open. After five years of struggling, he achieved his desired position. From the patient to the psychiatrist. ______________________________________________ Crime: Arson Reason: The house reeked of dried up blood First evaluation: Mentally ill, strong caution advised Final evaluation: Empathetic, willing to help, mentally stable, suited for care related professions, no danger of reverting His goal? Find the Problematics. Everything reeks of foul blood. *To broaden my audience and get more great people reading my story, I will soon start posting this story on Royal Road too. Thank you for your support. Please help me by donating to my Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/maralynx Twitter: CrowLying
The Universe needs an Eternal Ruler to continue its everlasting existence. Still, unfortunately, no one has ever reached the end of the ‘Eternal Temple of the Universe’ that appears every grand cycle, countless mighty existences perished there with no stories to tell. Finally, the will of the universe decided to forcefully evolve every single living being and give everyone a chance to reach the temple one last time. Either someone would succeed, or all living beings would die along with the universe. There was a man born on Earth so evil that will of chaos had no other choice but to contradict his nature by giving him the most astonishing Innate supreme divine ability that could ever exist ‘Prophet of all’ entrapping him and changing his life forever. Dominus, who was schemed against covertly and sneakily, was forced to comprehend the true meaning of life, so instead of committing evil like he was supposed too, he created an unprecedented and never imagined world for humanity that exceeded imagination, but the actions taken by the Will of the Universe completely toppled all of Dominus’s plans and forced him into desperate straits forcing him to make a choice. Save this version of humanity that he worked so hard to guide or leave them and rise to the top alone. Follow Dominus Morgol on his epic journey filled with chaos, order, and madness, along with an unprecedented burden that no one would shoulder but him. ................ Authors note: if you guys want a fantastic story, deep characters, with great action, world-building, comedy, and beautiful romance, unpredictable twists and outcomes, the unique main character, and plenty more, start reading. The novel will get better and better, believe me. Don’t let the cover deter you. It will be changed.
Aurel is a 17 year old boy whose life is boring as hell but a series of events completely changes his life, he comes to know about the dark secrets of his life and he must do everything in order to protect his home planet from a deadly apocalypse.
How long does it take to get into the reality of one's life? One day? Month? Year? How long will it take for her to know the reality of life? What'll she experience? Pain? Happiness? Hardship? Or death?
"There are memories that are meant to be forgotten, in order to protect yourself." --- Naomi Shiba is an eighteen years old, med student. She is from the third richest family who mistreated her. They only see her as a tool and they raised her as a so-called "perfect heiress." How long will she be able to keep up the perfect act? Then there are these people who enter her life and make it more complicated and hellish than it already is. Just like what others say, "Don't judge your life too fast, you haven't seen the whole hell of it." --- "I will never let you go, Naomi. Don't leave me again, my queen. Stay with me, please." - Ares Inverno "Tsk. I will let you have her for now. But let me remind you, SHE IS MINE." - Hephaestus Inverno "My lady, do you hate me that much? Why won't you love me?" - Adonis Caedem "If I ever harm you, then I will leave immediately if it means you'll be safe. I missed you, the only lady of my life." - Elijah Dias "Don't let yourself fall any further. Don't...get hurt. There are people around you who's heart breaks every time you get hurt." - Kyosuke Shinshi "You don't have to be in a relationship to have that special person as your inspiration, she is my inspiration even if she is not yet mine." - Apollo Amano "Stop letting them play with your heart! If I have to hurt you just to save you from further pain, then I will!" - Chase Won P.S. This is not a harem.
Lily has always loved dark arts and tales. She even wished to become a witch. But she could not become a witch since she is the princess and sole heiress of her country. However, in just one night Lily lost everything. She was destined to die but she survived. Not only she was able to get out alive, but she also got her heart's desire, to become a witch. Now only one thing is certain... she needs to exact REVENGE! Briar had always been suspicious of his childhood friend, Lily. Who in their right mind would like to become a witch? Being fascinated by myths, legends and history, Briar had always loved the Enclave of Kings. But for some reasons he could not shake the feeling that curse left by the Enclave's nemesis might be fulfilled.
Petty behaviour. Entitled people. And rude awakenings in the end. These three things together would usually result in a very satisfying set of events. For Nima this is her everyday life. Tired of other people's nonsense, Nima is on the path to say what needs to be said even if it means disrespecting her elders, criticizing strangers and being labelled as a despicable person. Although she's no saint herself, her aim is to make the world an honest place. With her own demons dragging her down she is not the ideal person to accomplish this goal, but she will do her best even while being a hypocrite. A book with serial one-shots set in real-life, featuring Nima's experiences in the modern world. Read as this sarcastic girl gets worked up over everything. Sometimes using her wits and common sense to deal with people. And other times just swearing at them internally. --------- Book cover is an original art piece made by me! Parental guidance strongly suggested due to presence of swear words. Please show your support by voting for this novel! And if you like it be sure to add it to your library.
Draven Reyes has been training his whole life for a single test that will help him grow stronger. With his three other friends, they finish the test using their "abilities" to aid them. Now, he must decide wether he can live up to his fathers impossible expectations and become the strongest in the best school for people like him. While he trains, an ancient evil rises from the dead to destroy the normal humans, believing that the powered ones are far superior.
“Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is like a broken-winged bird that cannot fly.” - Anonymous In the shade of the lone tree amid the clearing, a young boy seemed to nap peacefully as he leaned against the hard wood. However, the stillness of the picture was broken as his emerald eyes opened with a hint of annoyance. “Whistle, stop it!” The boy glared at the mischievous baby bird atop his head pulling on his ruffled, black hair. The equally black fluffball peeped in response before it plucked one more strand of hair. The boy snatched the bird off his hair and glowered at the naughty nestling, who he could swear was smirking back at him. As punishment, he spanked the bird before tossing it into the waving grasses that flourished underneath the sun. Ignoring the tiny, irate squawking coming from his companion, the boy gradually closed his eyes and embraced the darkness that came with it. When his eyes opened once more, the low, crude rocky ceiling greeted him instead of the calming scenery from before. “This is reality,” he thought. “But how I wish it wasn’t...” Those originally placid emerald eyes seemed to ripple with emotion then. … A boy, who once lived a happy life, saw the dark side of people that one fateful day. After being forced into labor to mine underground for years, he began to detest human interactions as he was afraid of the tragedy repeating once more. But despite how closed off he tried to be, a naive girl attempted to reach out to him. She wasn’t perfect and was full of flaws, but he felt a bit of peace that he yearned to have. … ON HIATUS CURRENTLY Update schedule: Tuesday and Saturday
In a Magical gem fuelled fantasy/dystopian world of Gaia. A son (Knoxx Abbot) struggles through life as a runaway with his father, as the authorities began to chase them one day. Confused and in a daze while trying to escape their pursuers, he hopes that one day they may be able to get back to their normal lives. But with mysteries lying in wait and big secrets uncovered, will he be able to go back? Or a bigger fate awaits him?
Life is unpredictable. Life in a world where soulmate exists is like putting cherry on top of a cake, beautiful, sweet, and pretty. Life with soulmate where mythical creatures exist spice up the situation even more. Adding up with apocalypse shows how savage the world truly is. An illegal program was created. With unknown goals, hundred experiments were confidentially. A prototype was stolen and leaked, causing major outbreaks around the world. Only 1% of those contaminated survived and Luo Yi is one of them, with the consequence of living as an undead. Apocalypse. Every being strived to survive. Humans, Vampire, Werewolves. By all means. PANDORA. Grants immortality. Why would anyone desire it when living in an apocalypse setting? During these times, love shouldn't be a problem. But why was Luo Yi caught in a tight situation between them? A conflict of love, between soulmate or a destined fate; a vampire or a werewolf; which one is the true love? *Disclaimer* *I Don't own the cover, so all rights reserves to OG artist and edited by @CrimsonMoonLover*
The Legend of Hades. The bloodshed caused by a generational massacre finally has to come to an end. The mistake of one endangers the life of all. From the line of Hades, a King will rise to fulfill this legend. And from the line of Octavius, the god of wolves, the tears of his direct descendant will burn armies. a powerful and dangerous combination. A mistake made by the gods now has to be rectified Alas, will they rectify the right one or will it just cause more problems? .
I was afraid to wish for more wishes, heaven granted us more time when I was slipping away from you back then when you rescued me from the battle field, I'm not afraid of the pain, but I can't tolerate the torment to have you go through the hurt again. We asked for a chance to live the next life differently for us to show our love to all. They listened again as cupid strike and the world witness our story that we made. But as how we have been told, each episode that we live through the century came with a price. We were lost moving on until the day stopped again, the eyes in-front froze as I looked up, a familiar figure which stood staring back on this same slope where we once cherished so much. And as two figures stood there frozen in time... the only movement was that of the snowflakes that falls through in between us that were once showering us with their blessings but now here, it melted like tears from heaven as the two souls stared at each other.... The vision of happy memories where the whisper of "I want to spend every winter here with you" stabs the heart even more as both tried to stay composed under the cold winter sky, stranded from the past. The nightmare of never wanting to bump into the past came crashing.... are we being fooled again? Is it heaven's wish for us so that we will live on or is there more to it.... C 1: The past & the present C 2:Dreams that haunt our misses C 3: Seal my heart please & protect him C 4: The snowflakes that binds us C 5: The wind tells me you are near C 6: Stay this way C 7: When souls unite C 8: From the depth of my heart C 9: The morning after C 10: The knotted fate at the start C11:The lighted path called home C12:When it becomes unbearable C13:The first séparation from the past C 14:The morning coffee filled with love C 15:Let us be bonded from now on C16:True Love that can’t be concealed C17:Through the centuries I still love you C18:Will you stand with me again C19: 258 - Hear My Heart C20: Our Dream Place that opens to the sky above C21: As one we live - need you by my side always C22: Beyond the deal - Our future that sparks from a dream C23: Author’s Closing Note: Dream with Passion, Live with Purpose, Act with Wisdom Updated 1 Sept 2020
Endru, a hybrid of a dragon mother and demon father, was abandon to a different world, in order to keep him safe. Alone and confused, Endru called out for a mother that was gone from him, forever. Until, a family of humans, running from a creature, picked him up and took him in. The family started to take care of Endru, thinking he was a harmless baby raven. Little did they know, he was a powerful being from a different world. As time pass, Endru will grow close to the family and vow to protect them from everyone and everything that wants to do them harm while keeping his true nature hidden. But not everything stays hidden, and Endru will learn the true meaning of what it is to be him. Follow Endru in his adventure of secrets, protection, and learning about himself. _______________________________________ Discord: https://discord.gg/u3ShHFa
Mingan, something of a lone wolf, has his solitary wanderings interrupted when he's put in a position to rescue Elloreah, one of the rare Ethereal. There is a demand for rare creatures such as Elloreah among the mythic black markets. Mingan cannot turn a blind eye knowing what will become of her should she fall prey to poachers. By rescuing her, he finds himself pulled back into the vast network and influences of the Tutelar, the shadow organization that keeps the magical elements of Earth under wraps. His fate is soon intertwined with Elloreah's, whose exile from her home world is far more complicated than either of them realize. The Wind Shifts is a rural fantasy novel based in the Central Valley of California, and follows the lives of the mythic creatures that hide in plain sight during the late 1960s. Are you enjoying this work? Support me on Ko-Fi.com, my user name is MSChavez. https://ko-fi.com/mschavez I've decided not to sign this work with WebNovel, so this work is entirely unpaid and will not have locked chapters. Donations are much appreciated and keep writers like me writing.
Draevin the elf is a top contender in the annual wizard tournament, he's even won a few times. In all his years he's never seen a human enter. Can humans even do magic? Everyone in this tournament is fighting for something and only the best of the best can win. This year's tournament is looking like it could change everything. Nᴇᴡ Cʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀs ᴘᴜʙʟɪsʜᴇᴅ ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ Mᴏɴᴅᴀʏ, Wᴇᴅɴᴇsᴅᴀʏ ᴀɴᴅ Fʀɪᴅᴀʏ. Sᴜᴘᴘᴏʀᴛ ᴍʏ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ ᴀɴᴅ ʀᴇᴀᴅ ᴜᴘ ᴛᴏ 5 ᴄʜᴀᴘᴛᴇʀs ᴇᴀʀʟʏ ʙʏ sᴜʙsᴄʀɪʙɪɴɢ ᴀᴛ Pᴀᴛʀᴇᴏɴ.ᴄᴏᴍ/JDFɪsᴛᴇʀ
"What if the situation is different? That we didn't have to hide what we feel to save others? What if we take the risk? Will you join me?" Clay asked, sincerity gleaming through his eyes looking directly at Jean's. "Will it be worth of what we're losing for? What if we crash and burn?" Jean replied. A story a fourth year high school teenager named Clay and his 'enemy-turned-friend' Jean, Mark and Lynn and how their contrasting life patterns brings significance for the rest of their lives.
Living on a quiet street in Rome is Quartz Vermillion. He has a mere age of twenty-four with a curious and gentle nature. Aside from this, he loves to read history books pertaining to his motherland's past. One day, his father returned from an auction with a strange chess set on his grasp. Gli Sacchi, a chess set that was made during the times of monarchs and rulers. It was found in a house which was long-abandoned by its residents. Quartz, however, wasn't interested in the game. He thought of Chess as a boring and dull game yet that all changed when the pieces started to move at its own. Although, the abrupt movement of the pieces without the presence of any human at all is only the start of Quartz's new adventure. From Earth to another world, Quartz is destined to stop creatures and foes alike from expanding their wrath throughout the land of Sacchi. Through his quest, he meets allies, foes, and creatures alike wherein some of them may be traitors and turncoats. Make a move, and set up the battalion. The destiny of Sacchi now falls under his hands!
One day, the world was suddenly tormented by a high concentration of frequency waves unheard by human ears. It was detected by radios, TVs, computers, and etc. But there are those who heard it. And those that did suffered from a mild migraine to an unbearable, head-splitting pain that was followed by vomiting of blood and uncontrollable hallucinations. After a day of suffering, those affected became monsters. But there were also those that became . . . Something entirely else . . . ~oOo~ Updates will be slow. Keep Reading! love you guys! ~oOo~
Lia Brentvale is a 25-year-old part-timer who just got fired from her two jobs. Her parents aren’t around, and she’s the breadwinner of her family, providing for her two college brothers. She grabbed an opportunity to work in a famous research center called the D.M. Cadre Research Facility, which specializes in studying human-animal mutations. As a caretaker of a mysterious vulture mutant, she’s contracted with a high salary but exposed to a lot of risks. She spends time with him, unexpectedly unlocking his chained heart, and unlocking the secrets that lie within the research facility. ----------------- Lia realized that she had been staring at his 6-pack abs! She was so embarrassed and changed the topic, "Uhm… Aren’t you cold? Why don’t you wear a jacket?” “I don’t need one… My wings can keep me warm.” he said as he showed her that he can cover himself with his big, brown wings. “I can even make you warm. Would you like to try?” ----------------- [TEMPORARY BOOK COVER: from Pinterest, not mine] [ORIGINAL BOOK COVER: Commissioned! Soon!!]
Disclaimer: This novel’s story and characters are fictitious. Certain long-standing institutions, agencies, and public offices are mentioned, but the characters involved are wholly imaginary. An entry on Spirity Awards Spring 2020 under the Apocalyptic category. This story is of a High school boy with different family backgrounds. He is Marlin Subaru Smith. A boy whose mother was a Japanese and his father was American. He was athletic and wants to learn from his father, his grandpas and his uncle. He was vacationing when he woke up to apocalyptic world. Let's see what he will do with the problems he will face.
"Don't you want to see your friends alive once more?" Said the unknown demon. Rey who has lost everything was given a chance to change the future, but he doesn't know this wasn't his first time going back. How many times has he gone back? How many times did he fail to remember? How many times must he suffer the same fate over and over? Join Rey as he tries to change the grim future and uncover the secrets of the cataclysm.
The wisdom of humans paved the way for the posthuman. On the borderline between natural and synthetic, organic and mechanical, a divine being is looming to take on the heritage of its creators. Humans are not the end of the line and their evolutionary heirs have come. The shining age of Cyborgs is rising in the darkest era of mankind. Without memories of his previous life, DWN-49, called Dawn, awakens inside a technologically modified artificial body in the lawless Megapolis Haven, the last refuge in a war-ravaged world. From now on he is destined to be a superhuman killing machine and a member of the Archetype Commando, an elitist mercenary group. After the arising of inexplicable recollections from the past, doubts haunt Dawn. Is he really just a superior tool, a means to an end? Or is he still human after all, in control of his own fate? Follow him on his journey to upgrade himself, find powerful artifacts and unravel Haven's countless mysteries...
On Hiatus for some weeks "Why should I bow before that man?", asked a kid. "He's a top aristocrat of this kingdom. Kid, we're low classmen. We are born in a lower class that's why we have to bow before him," stated the man. "Can I be like him? I also want to be respected by people," said the kid with an affirmed voice. "Hahaha. You're good in joking, kid. A lowclass can't become a Scholar like them," mumbled the man and walked away. Determined to become a Scholar like the man described, the kid decided to be like the one he saw on the very first day in the kingdom city. Lost his mother & father; pushed away his lover, the protagonist Kim Yoon Shik negotiated all the difficulties in his path and finally achieved the dream that he has seen in his childhood. Cover photo is taken from Pinterest so the copyrights are owned by its owner. If wanna contact me then Join discord. My Discord ID is : Light_ray#3569 My other ongoing works: Demon in the Human World The Revenge Turned to Love
Alusec, a god who was betrayed by his lover, student and several other gods; finally escapes from imprisonment after being kept away for several thousand years. He tries returning to the planets he lorded over only to discover that they have long been destroyed by the gods who betrayed him. He sets out to seek revenge as he slowly recovers his powers. With time he would find out that things aren't as simple as he initially assumed. Follow Alusec on a journey revenge and new self discovery. Please vote and add to your library if you like it.
'Hey Albert, By the time you see this, I would probably be somewhere out in the world, living the best time of my life. I've got only 5 years to live, and I would make sure it would be the best 5 years of my life. Don't be surprised if I steal the limelight of the news channel once in a while. Peace out!' ~~~~~~~ What would you do if you've been diagnosed with stage three cancer? Go for treatment prescribed by the doctors, of course. But this is not the case for Keagan, a twenty year old man who has been diagnosed with cancer on his birthday. Instead of feeling despondency, Keagan has a bucket list on what he wants to do before he leaves the world. And so, to fulfill his wishes, he ran away from home. "You know what's the safe word?" "Duhh! We've been through this before!" "Tell me then" "Scurry."
*I will release only on Fridays* The human race did live on top of the food chain for a long time. Their intelligence gave them the power to reign over the blue planet although having weak bodies, but their greed will be their end. This is a story about Ben Lupus, who could come back in time. Using his knowledge, he will change the destiny of his family and friends and build himself an imperium. Will his actions result in saving his loved one and his race? PS: This is my first webnovel so please be gentle! As I am a European, I will naturally name the character as Europeans do, so first comes the forename, and second comes the family name. I am very thankful for each constructive criticism and I will try to improve my novel. I don't have the copyright of the picture, if you own it please report and I will take it down.
Veru once forced into work by a tyrant, finally manages to escape with his friends, Hina and Hose. Unfortunately, the ship they boarded, met with an accident, and the three find themselves on the shores of a desolated island, where they meet Sanim and the other crew members. While the other think the storm to be a coincidence, there is someone who knows it is not; they venture deep inside of the forest, and one by one they meet their demise. Veru and his friends, having lost the entire crew, continue to search for an escape, until one day Veru mysteriously vanishes. No one knows where is he, except one. Having been stabbed in his back, Veru finds the true meaning of the isle. Both, the Devil and God reside there. Whom will he choose? Will he turn to the dark side?
When Felix and his friends get told the truth about an adjoining world of magic that they never knew existed. They get given the choice to explore the possibilities and learn how to harness the elements. Along the way they will experience many adventures that will test the strength of the bond they have together.
I used to follow this story on wattpad but several months ago I stopped using the app because they kept pulling stories for no reason. I am SO glad I decided to check for it here! I have absolutely loved chatching up on it! The characters Floris and Alvis seem to be more like brothers than friends. But, I guess in a small village where they are by far the youngest people there, they would be. The addition of Kathrina seems to really balance out their group quite nicely. I'm wondering if there will be a love triangle in the future? The way the characters are quickly growing into their own is definitely what keeps me coming back for more. I am very excited to see their magical abilities start to develop. I really enjoy how vivid the author is with details in regards to their environment, such as confusion of their new world and all the alchemical elements. I truly feel like the story is playing out in front of me, or as if I were part of the story itself. This story makes me laugh out loud all the time with their antics and shenanigans! Please keep the chapters coming as I can't wait for more!
The adventure story is actually fun and great. There is an immersion in it. I hope that the MC will gain some special talents or traits soon=) I dont really feel the naruto part but I feel the Tolkien part when they are forced to leave their home. And I feel the grandeur of the world building. Although author is new but he puts his heart into the story. Some helpful suggestions to make the format better: - Shorter paragrahs - Remove the Chapter in the title
Edit: Sorry, I deleted my first review cause F**KING AUTOCORRECT RUINED THE VERY FIRST SENTENCE! (Breaths deeply) An amazing story that, while being fantastical, is realistic and gripping. The main character is very shrewd and seems to be an incredible alchemist despite his young age. However, unlike most stories, it's quite believable as the author takes his time explaining and building how alchemy works in his world and how competent the MC - Floris - is (I'm ashamed to admit it, but even I just grazed through my story saying, "Yep, the MC knows alchemy, here's a potion he made in one paragraph!" instead of spending time explaining it). Unfortunately, this does have the effect of making the story occasionally feel dry and the long paragraphs don't really help either. Or maybe it's cause I'm reading this while suffering excruciating pain from my legs which I've had in a brace for a while now hence the add (attention deficit disorder, not the math, silly) The description is also very vivid, I can imagine the village, isolated by a swampy forest full of poisonous creatures. The beginning also made me laugh; the MC's grandma was strikingly like my own (though, in my case, she'd spank me with a stick if I ever coated the house in white powder - wait, that came out wrong) and I really believed that the MC was planning on making ninja smoke from Naruto until he revealed that it was a failed antidote experimentation. Grammar is impeccable, it's really good but I've noticed that a few paragraphs were separated mid-sentence. I'm assuming this may be a formatting issue when copying and pasting from Google docs or Microsoft word, but I'm confident that the author can fix them with a simple proofread, hence no docking of points in regards to grammar. (Also author, if you're reading this, try using the chrome extension of Grammarly; it's a really good way to fix any of the potential errors you might have straight on your Inkstone's chapter edit) Overall, it's a fascinating read that I'll keep in my library and would definitely recommend to any fantasy reader
This book is extraordinary in so many ways that I am having a hard time even writing this review because I don’t think I can find the words to really do it justice. -The synopsis could be better so take your time and think it out. -I love the fact Naruto was one of your inspirations for this story! _recommend😭😭😭_