Half-Fated Sir
feels like it was written by a grade schooler. definitely on the list of trash novels not worth wasting time on, but not the absolute worst on this platform plot is a mixture of contrived nonsense and cliches and illogical thought processes. feels like the love child of a bad fan-fic of some bad isekai novel met a bad cultivation novel, and then the scenes were chopped up and thrown together. i think the author had some scenes from other novels in mind and tried to recreate them into his poorly thought out story. not the worst on this platform, but it is on the list of trash i don't want to read. could have genuinely been written by a kid. if so, sorry for the scathing review, maybe come back to writing after you have more experience/graduate from grade-school? if you enjoy this novel: my condolences, the webnovel app must have taken it's toll on you. I feel your pain, there are many bad stories on here, but try to recover, maybe pick up a "professional" novel every now and then so as to dilute your sinking standards with something of quality?
It's not a masterpiece but I found it enjoyable, the only thing the system does is improving his talent in a determined skill, not giving missions and talking to the MC, for me is a plus. The MC is OP but still needs to put some effort, his mana pool can't handle spells too way ahead of his level, I'm curious to see the rest of the book at least. Worldbuilding is still in its infant stage (if there will be any) it's not complicated to understand the levels of powers and all if you read some Cultivation and fantasy novels before, The MC it's not a genius but its also not a dumb character, at least not yet.
The only thing commendable about the Characters is the MC because he is maybe the most consistent one even if he throws away characters and allies like they’re wet tissues, so far Ernest popped back into the novel with a different background and a eighth of a brain left from her very first intro sequence, ping or ling whatever his name was from the water sages battle disappeared without word, same with Winnie but better-ish, he never settled his noble status for his family yet, so his family is probably out on the streets. Oh yeah he never got any type of achievement for becoming a body cultivator though it atleast hints that he’ll awaken the lightning attribute. anyway the story has a lot of Background errors that are fumbled arounds with and the same can be said for characters also basically the world setting is decent enough power scaling is off somewhat but whatever, if you care about MC development instead of everthing else then sure decent enough to be a “nothing better to do”read but not nearly enough effort was put into keeping details consistent for side characters and world development.
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First few dozen chapters are great. Falls apart after he learns Dazzling Dragon, however, as the author seems to delete his pet crippled, baby dragon from existence, never again mentions the black market girl who was a love interest and just removes the other love interest from the story. Not just that, but he also loses the ability to upgrade spells to however high he wants, seemingly being limited by the highest cap or limit of the skill. The author removed everything that made it interesting, getting rid of the warm but protective Winnie, the cold, strong, and independent Ernest, the cute, mischievous, but powerful Ling, and the very foundation that made this story interesting to begin with, infinite skill levels; now it's just another story among the sea of trash out there.
Sorry the Translation quality killed it for me. The translation became more and more Ridiculous in quality after the paid chapters. I dont know why but i think the translator uses machine translation really extensively and does not care about the money people pay to read this. It seems like a money grab for me. I would love to read this but sorry i just feel ripped off paying this translation.
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