Reviews of Lyra .B

Hello! This is Illy. And I like all authors am here to give myself a 5.0 star review. I know that I'm not that much of a good writer, but I want to bring out some of the neglected things from HP world out. Like how overwhelmed Harry would have felt, like did Petunia really hate harry that much? Or the explanation of the black family's decisions... There are much more to each character. They are not just insane to build up hate, they have had feelings of their own, they had reasons to behave as they did. Not that I mean they're right though. They too are human and not simply the monsters that most poeple assume they are. And, I wish to explore this aspect too: what if the person who created the first horcrux is still alive? (I mean herpo the foul...) That's what is going to be in here. And please give this fanfic a try... Please don't neglect it just because it is a Female lead novel...

Up until here, the story is good. I hope you keep updating. But the thing is, you should put more into your writing style. It's good enough, but not the best. And up until here, I don't see any growth in Lyra's character, and it's too early to judge that as it's been only 10 chapters. I hope she'll grow as you said. I also hope she doesn't rely too much on the ML. Anyway, it's a good read. I'd love to read this fully.