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Lynx Alpha Nigellus. The Conqueror of Oblivions

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Tara_Troop10101
Tara_Troop10101Lv1Tara_Troop10101

Really good! I love the characters and all their different personalities! Also really thought it was funny to add the “dashing smile”! Love the stoy idea and can’t wait to read more!💕✨

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SoraTheTroll
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nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work nice work

Dark_Suns
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Keep up the good work

TacoKun
TacoKunLv4TacoKun

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

DaoistvIQnnn
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Monalisa_Abigail
Monalisa_AbigailLv1Monalisa_Abigail

woww this author has a great way with describing his character's and that's so cool I loved the storyline I love the character's and their story it is great, interesting and entertaining

fswmoq80
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SleepyKola
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i will give it a 5 star. Even though this is not my fav genre, it was intriguing. The author definitely put a lot of effort in them, the plots and descriptions are on point. The development of the plot keep us reading! Good job Author! Keep it up, don't be discourage!

Noc_Tristan222
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I'm helping myself by putting a review on it so please no hate... I love my story and I enjoy it, I need your support and please help me! Support my story guys and I'll be more motivated!

nixrsr
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this book is so good! it's storyline got me really hooked. it's my cup of tea! good job author! you have such a wide and wonderful imagination!

Myamya
MyamyaLv1Myamya

Actually, the story before had lotS of grammatical errors until just now. The chapters are now Incredible and very nice! I enjoy the story and like to Share the world i saw in this story! I heard also the author Is practicing to draw his own manhwa! I love to see The arts the aUthor will make🥰🥰

demonessNikita
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The story is a promising one. The characters are well defined like Mathew, just have some minor gramatical error but overall it is good to read.

shortcke
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I love the storyline although I've got no idea about the seven seas. The story is well developed and i love how the characters are display. I would totally read it.

sunshinegirlX
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I LOVE THIS BOOK SO MUCH! PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS! I NEED THEM FOR MY WELL BEING! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

angeline_kassandra
angeline_kassandraLv10angeline_kassandra

I'm not familiar with the 7 seas, but I find this book really interesting. To the author, please post more chapters. [img=update][img=update][img=update]

BlueRobin377
BlueRobin377Lv2BlueRobin377

What an interesting synopsis, that was one of the many reasons I was drawn to this book. I'm hopeful that the wonderful author can post more chapters!

marichat_nettenoir
marichat_nettenoirLv11marichat_nettenoir

Impressive story, update more often, and you’ll definitely get more reads. The book is really interesting and seems really promising. Oh and the grammar is spot on. 👍[img=update]

Burlesque_Dancer
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It has good plot and no plot holes which is nice. And also it's consistent in its world build-up. It's good with character development too. I only have a few complains: 1. Grammar needs improvement. Punctuation is important. 2. Too fast. The plot moves super fast and sometimes it's confusing. And it's even more confusing when one character has like, 3 names. That's it. besides this, it's a great read.

MikruZero
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Tbh, I love the book. This is usually the writing style I like. But! But, that doesn't mean that other readers will like it. Lemme tell you why! First is the synopsis! You don't have too put that much info dump on the first thing your reader will read. They will immediately get bored out of it or basically ignored it. What I recommend you to do is just make it more simple and mysterious. This way, you can arouse your reader's curiosity and at the same time make it easier to understand Second is the story itself. Just like the first reason, too much info dump. This is the problem when your setting is a fantasy world. Make it shorter and descriptive as possible. Avoid repeating the same adjectives and nouns. Use their synonyms instead. Plus, grammatical errors are found including the tenses. You often mix it up probably. Lastly is the fighting scenes and other things that need in-depth explanations. Basically, you sometimes overestimate the descriptions or you are stating the obvious. Please refrain from biasing your mc. If the first sentence describes how a sword pierces the arm, you don't have to add nonsense like, the arm was bleeding. Why? The reader can picture out the bleeding part you are telling too. Instead, add some excitement to it. For example, 'His arm was pierced by a sword. And the pain inflicted in it caused his body to lose control for a split-second'. This way, you can open up a lot of possibilities in the next fighting scene. Your readers will have a hard time determining the future and the excitement will make them more attached to the book Overall, this book has potential. If you have any questions directly ask me in discord.

Ahyesha_Manubag
Ahyesha_ManubagLv1Ahyesha_Manubag

Pretty cool because thw story goes so fast that it entertains me. each chapter has some exciting events In it. i love the latest Chapters and it really hypes things up. reccomend this book to those patient readers