Reviews of LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD
LUSTFUL PARADISE: Shinmai cross DxD
HIKARU_GENJI
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- Writing Quality
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- Character Design
- world background
Bro you have a great concept for your F. F. But At least make M.C. a Reincarnated person or give him memories of the story somehow if anyone wants to see a dense M.C. with same personality, making same mistakes. Even though you have tweaked the world they will still prefer seeing the original anime again rather than this.........
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Muy buena la historia sigue así no hay historia shimao no testamen solo dos en web novel y las de más historia de este anime hay que pagar en Patreon y eso es molesto si van publicar la historia y solo que a mitad de camino toca que leer el capítulo en Patreon con dinero entonces publicar la historia desde el principio con dinero es molesto sigue con tu historia es muy buena no eres como los demás que hay pagar un capítulo para ver en la mitad de la historia shimao no testamen
A great fanfic, it is to be expected of the hikaru right, summarizing so far chapter 80, where he joined perfectly dxd with shinmai. Only criticism is that it makes more than a month without launching,(I think it stopped for other works) but itself if it continues so the work can become one of the main fanfic of dxd, which is a universe that I love very much, but is not very well used. Just hope mc doesn't get quick op to have good fights and that he has lots of chaps. Mt obg! (I used google translator)
This is a good story and my problems with it come down to personal taste, that said anyone reading this review should read this fanfic for themselves and see if they like it. The thing I have an issue with is the amount of internal monolog/exposition. One character would say to another "Good morning how are you?" and we spend the rest of the chapter in someone's head reading about their life story before they go off on a tangent about how some races are both similar and different. Some people are fine with this because it gives them a better understanding of how the characters think. I however feel most of it is unnecessary and prefer the show don't tell approach. It also slows the pacing of the story way to much. I've been reading it in batches of 10-15 chapters in order to get the feeling that the plot is moving whenever I do sit down and read it. Now with all that being said I'm still reading this story because it's good and I like it, the near constant internal monolog just slows the story down to much for me to give anything more than 3 stars.
Great story ❤️ it . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
