Reviews of Luna: The Light of the Moon

Hay posted a long review but it did not post due to login. I'll summarize, adding side topics or stories or ugh flashbacks can help flesh out characters more. Even tho I do understand she is smart and resourcefull and that she's into superheroes, anime and justice perhaps adding some graduating class awards would point out that shes gifted so much that building Ai and tech is easy to her or perhaps even a natural gift. I do know this story is pitched to romance involvement, it's because of its synopsis rather than the chapter buildup until now, but I do suspect chapter 4 is going towards that.

The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader i got sinked in this world the Author had created. A fsacinating escape from reality into another world. A great read

Amazing, satisfying and page turner !!! I can literally imagine everything that I’m reading, good plot, keeps me interested, I can tell that the author is very talented.