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Okay in chapter 13 i said I'd be back to review again so here I am Writing quality (4/5): It's good, understandable and minimal grammatical errors. There are just some typographical error, but bearable. I think you should do some proof reading first before you release the chapter. Stability of update (5/5): I have nothing to say here as author always update daily. Story Development (5/5): In all honesty, I'm not into the courting process, if you wanna date, just date and not be hard to get. The development between Alexander and Sabrina is just right for me (PERSONAL PREFERENCE) it's not too pushy nor awkward. The chemistry between then is just so good! Never awkward. And also I love how this story is different from other romance stories here on WN. Character design (5/5): I love how the author plays with the emotion of the readers, it's so on point. Like you will really feel the hatred and love for a character. For example Jacob, I felt pity for that man but felt disgust instantly. You get my point? But yeah, please don't add anymore characters for now as it may get messy, I like how it is right now. World Background (5/5): Author provides necessary descriptions for each setting, its not hard to imagine the place they are in. So i gave 5 stars. Looking forward for more. I want dem cute scenes between Sabrina and Alexander. Also from Kenzie and Grey. This is a good book đ Hope you guys enjoy it as how I enjoyed reading it đ
Hi guys, Author here! So I just want to give you guys a heads up on what to expect from this novel. (sorry for the shameless review) 1. The book might contain SOME (SOME) R-18 scenes, so if you're a pure minded person or you're not into mature content, you can choose to skip them while reading or just not read the book at all. 2. The development between the FL and ML is fast paced. So if you're into the traditional stuff, like the woman should be hard to get or something, this may not be the book for you. 3. ML is very possessive and bossy in the first chapters. May cause some trigger to others. I'm reminding you already in advance. 4. In the future chapters, there might be major misunderstandings between the ML and FL, so if you guys are not into those stuff, please don't read the book. 5. Update is daily so don't worry :) - (most likely 1-2 chapters per day) If you have questions, feel free to ask and I'm going to answer all of them <3 I hope you enjoy the book! Happy reading!
I love this book so far! I can def see the potential in this book! Keep it up and another helpful tip is to update frequently (yes am I hypocrite since I donât do that but anyways đ) and just have fun when writing! Donât do it bc of other people or something else, it turns into an obligation rather than doing it bc you love writing or for fun. Anyways good job đ
Authorâs book started out well and interesting. As the book progresses, the author clearly does not care about formatting errors or proofreading her work. She has posted duplicate chapters multiple times (wasting our coins and fast passes), the formatting errors make the book difficult to read, and many grammatical errors make this book frustrating to read. The storyline is great, but because of the problems I listed above, Iâm too frustrated to continue reading this book.