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Love's Penalties

ruchika_mangeshwar

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What is Love's Penalties

Read Love's Penalties novel written by the author ruchika_mangeshwar on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Teen stories, โœ“ Newest updated โœ“ All rights reserved

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The story runs around Jackcy, who betrayed her only love of life, and he came back for revenge on her, his love turns into hate, and he came to break her, but he could not, the story is full of romance, drama, tragedy, and suspense.

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LucidGlome
LucidGlomeLv5LucidGlome

A respectable attempt. Nice take on sexual fidelity. Written in first person past tense (limited perspective). Pros: The characters have great integrity and loyalty towards eachother. Cons: Grammatical and punctuation errors in some chapters while others are good (perhaps some are yet to be edited), constant switching between POVs (I feel it is inconsistent; you might like it). I am at chapter 24 now and the while the characters have their strong points, they are rather irrational something (is love truly blind?) and the side characters show excessive care for the FL and ML alike. Perhaps the author wanted too keep the focus of the story intact but that made the side characters start to feel inanimate after some time. Overall, give it a chance. With some editing, it can turn out to be a great work.

Amit_Verma_5670
Amit_Verma_5670Lv1Amit_Verma_5670

Hats off to the writer of this story. I mean, how a person can write such an amazing story. I'vs read the story, but mentally I'm still in the story. Everyone should read it once and experience a worth reading story.

Doctor_Min
Doctor_MinLv3Doctor_Min

I want to rate this after i finished reading chapter 1, and I found this story interesting, i really look forward on the upcoming chaps, hoping i won't be disappointed, i know i may felt stress but that is normal for me since all stories will really bring you stress as a matter of fact๐Ÿ˜‚. So yeah I'm wishing the author a good luck on making this mysterious piece.... Fightin'๐Ÿ’ช

Mia_2550
Mia_2550Lv1Mia_2550

Wel done author keep writing like this stories I really like this novel... ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿป Great jobโค๏ธ this story is commendable ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป You are such a great writer โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

Fetora
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Olivia_2650
Olivia_2650Lv1Olivia_2650

Good job! Well done! Fantastic! Perfect! Thatโ€™s great! Nice work! Excellent! Thatโ€™s really remarkable. Good grades! This story is praiseworthy ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Very interesting โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ Keep writing ๐Ÿ™ˆ ๐Ÿ™ˆ ๐Ÿ™ˆ

TheDarkest_Girl
TheDarkest_GirlLv1TheDarkest_Girl

I am just in love with this novel, the characters are amazing and the storyline is so interesting, and the way the story is described is so beautiful, I feel like I can imagine every sceneโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ , awesome work author, keep writing ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜

Mynxiii1
Mynxiii1Lv2Mynxiii1

As I have read many chapters already, i notice that some grammar are wrong; however, I like the story, full of mystery and very confusing. Wishing a good luck for the author ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’™

Kayleigh_Harkins
Kayleigh_HarkinsLv1Kayleigh_Harkins

The translation isnโ€™t good. It make it very confusing. But I love the story. Iโ€™ve felt every emotion the characters have. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Rody_Amgad
Rody_AmgadLv1Rody_Amgad

The story is very great. I loved it. And the story is so interesting, cute and beautiful. I Advise everyone to read it because it is just amazing. โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ–คโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’Ÿโฃ๏ธ โค๏ธ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ–คโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿ’˜๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’—๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’Ÿโฃ๏ธ

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