Reviews of Lotus and the Demon
Lotus and the Demon
MidnightX
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
It reminded me of an anime genre I really love to watch. The nostalgia got me hooked! I liked how the interactions with each character worked like clockwork! Also, the author's unique style of writing made me visualize this novel as light and colorful as a Studio Ghibli movie. The write-up is refreshing. I would like to give this 2 thumbs up and toes as well if it doesn't suffice!
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I personally liked this story, despite its flaws. It didn't have any major grammatical mistakes, that's for sure! But in some lines, the author should really add some coma(,) or dots (...) to make the conversation seem more realistic. Another thing that bugged me was the sudden personality change of the characters (ex. from angry to caring and all that), maybe add a few monologues of the characters in between the changes to make them seem more probable. Another thing, we didn't really get much insight into the background. I have read a fair number of chapters, but still, the background of the world was confusing. Maybe the author doesn't really need to add text walls full of boring descriptions to build the world. Just expressing little hints here and there in the form of dialogues would work. Other than that, it's a fairly entertaining story (even though I don't usually read stories with female leads), and I'd recommend it to those who love to read stories that gradually create romantic relationships between the main leads, rather than making them fall in love from the bat.
It mentioned me of an anime class I really admire to watch. The nostalgia got me crooked! I liked how the intercommunications with each character worked like precision! Also, the author's unique style of writing made me visualize this novel as light and colorful as an anime movie. This is 2 thumbs up and toes as well if it doesn't serve! Please read and review my webnovel: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You
So this novel is awesome. The first thing is the adorable female protagonist, I started to like her, she is true to herself and is straight forward. The second point is the world setting, I liked how demons were also showcased to be people who poses emotions, usually, they are posed as bloodthirsty maniacs. This novel made me feel like a kid reading his new manga book. Nostalgic is the word to describe my mood when I read this. Author, you need to be more detailed in some aspects regarding the key characters, other than that It's a must-read. Keep it up and I hope to see it mature into an awesome piece of work.
