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Loli’s travels through existence [DROPPED]

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Dying wasn’t something she expected but being transmigrated into Highschool DxD wasn’t something she could have imagined! But why the hell is she a LOLI?! (All characters besides my self created ones go to there respective owners, I don’t own any pictures I may use in this) (This is a lesbian/Yuri fanfic, and I think I’m gonna stick with female lead fan-fictions, as they make my life way easier, this is all being typed on my phone so don’t expect good grammar, and/or spelling) (The first world is DxD, it’s gonna be AU, but not that heavy, she will only stay there until the factions meeting)

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Ilyana_hanami
Ilyana_hanamiLv4Ilyana_hanami

Writing quality [★★★★★] Story development [★★★★★] Character design [★★★★★] Updating Stability [★★★★★] World background [★★★★★] > Everything on this novel is written well and amazing,to be honest I kinda hooked from first chapter.Hopefully author-san don't drop this novel cause the story is interesting and has potential.Thank you for your hard work and take care yourself.

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv6Spelloyal

I'll be honest I'm only giving 3 stars because it's rare to see a loli mc. The fanfic itself barely deserves 1,5 stars. The storie are boring, basically a mc op being op and picking up wives like someone picking vegetables at the market. Just making it clear that mc taking waifus like vegetables doesn't bother me, it will only turn into something bad if she keeps taking several without even any development with the current ones. But still boring at this moment. What bothers me the most about the fanfic is that the author didn't bother to create a fun moment like someone bumping into the mc on a date with Ophis, someone trying to trick the mc or hit on her just for Ophis to show up and hug her making them freak out, Someone trying to use the mc as a hostage against Ophis just so Ophis doesn't react and then finds out that the mc is OP, or Ophis saving the mc as a princess just for the mc to show how she is the OP herself right away and etc. I can't think of many examples right now, but it lacks the fun and interesting moments that an op mc story needs to not be boring. I also can summarize each chapter in a line or two and you wouldn't be missing out on anything funny, interesting or exciting moment that would make it worth reading anyway. In addition, other small points like the mc accepting the invitation to visit Rias' club even though he's not interested also make things boring. The mc is op and not afraid of anyone, so it would be better to ignore the invitation and let Rias come to the mc by herself thus generating some fun or interesting interactions, but with the mc just going with the flow and being opc it's all very boring .

Nakamura_Koharu
Nakamura_KoharuLv3Nakamura_Koharu

Not a perfect score yet since I don't know your update schedule maybe when this get to 20 chapters I'll give you a 5 stars. For now I'm enjoying the story so far since it is rare to see an OP Fem MC that is not afraid to flex along with it not being angst, drama, morality or exisistential crisis that most MC that got Isekai/Transmigrate.

Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv3Dao_of_Melancholy

Just like your other one Amazing work so far her ability is interesting since she can keep one aspect. My only complaint is chapter size honestly but maybe they will get longer as time goes on.... Well besides that 10/10

Endless_Evolution2
Endless_Evolution2Lv3Endless_Evolution2

i don't know what to say maybe more wholesome scene ? and i just want to say that i enjoy this fanfic , keep it up author do your best ,.. . . . .....

therealwarrior700
therealwarrior700Lv3therealwarrior700

10/10 is one of the best fanfics i read would recommend

Josh4848_48
Josh4848_48Lv3Josh4848_48

Even though it dosent have much so far, it is by far one of my most favorite books ever. I hope there will be more because the story is absolutly sublime.

Boku_No_Pico
Boku_No_PicoLv1Boku_No_Pico

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Noah_9188
Noah_9188Lv1Noah_9188

I recommend it to all Fffffggtrtrftgfffffffffffffffffggffffffcggvcvgggvggggvvggggvvgggggggggggggvcggggffffffffccffffffffffffffffttfffffffffffffffffffgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

xiaomin_Ye101876
xiaomin_Ye101876Lv2xiaomin_Ye101876

this seems cool

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