Loli’s travels through existence [DROPPED]

Writing quality [★★★★★] Story development [★★★★★] Character design [★★★★★] Updating Stability [★★★★★] World background [★★★★★] > Everything on this novel is written well and amazing,to be honest I kinda hooked from first chapter.Hopefully author-san don't drop this novel cause the story is interesting and has potential.Thank you for your hard work and take care yourself.

I'll be honest I'm only giving 3 stars because it's rare to see a loli mc. The fanfic itself barely deserves 1,5 stars. The storie are boring, basically a mc op being op and picking up wives like someone picking vegetables at the market. Just making it clear that mc taking waifus like vegetables doesn't bother me, it will only turn into something bad if she keeps taking several without even any development with the current ones. But still boring at this moment. What bothers me the most about the fanfic is that the author didn't bother to create a fun moment like someone bumping into the mc on a date with Ophis, someone trying to trick the mc or hit on her just for Ophis to show up and hug her making them freak out, Someone trying to use the mc as a hostage against Ophis just so Ophis doesn't react and then finds out that the mc is OP, or Ophis saving the mc as a princess just for the mc to show how she is the OP herself right away and etc. I can't think of many examples right now, but it lacks the fun and interesting moments that an op mc story needs to not be boring. I also can summarize each chapter in a line or two and you wouldn't be missing out on anything funny, interesting or exciting moment that would make it worth reading anyway. In addition, other small points like the mc accepting the invitation to visit Rias' club even though he's not interested also make things boring. The mc is op and not afraid of anyone, so it would be better to ignore the invitation and let Rias come to the mc by herself thus generating some fun or interesting interactions, but with the mc just going with the flow and being opc it's all very boring .

Not a perfect score yet since I don't know your update schedule maybe when this get to 20 chapters I'll give you a 5 stars. For now I'm enjoying the story so far since it is rare to see an OP Fem MC that is not afraid to flex along with it not being angst, drama, morality or exisistential crisis that most MC that got Isekai/Transmigrate.

Just like your other one Amazing work so far her ability is interesting since she can keep one aspect. My only complaint is chapter size honestly but maybe they will get longer as time goes on.... Well besides that 10/10

i don't know what to say maybe more wholesome scene ? and i just want to say that i enjoy this fanfic , keep it up author do your best ,.. . . . .....

10/10 is one of the best fanfics i read would recommend

Even though it dosent have much so far, it is by far one of my most favorite books ever. I hope there will be more because the story is absolutly sublime.

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this seems cool