Reviews of Locked With The Monster Forever
Locked With The Monster Forever
Loneliness_Lover
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I love this story! The storyline is captivating and the characters are interesting. I look forward to how this story will continue to unfold. Thank you for the updates and keep up the good work.
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Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
This novel has a rich story! The synopsis alone get draw the readers closer to this book. The only thing that I'd like to point out are some grammatical errors found on the chapters. These includes the passive voice misuse ("We're trying to hit on her" which could be "tried hitting on her") and missing quotation marks on the first few chapters. Besides that, this novel is awesom!
The grammar is decent and I think that the world building is good as well. While I do think that some of the characters sound like stereotypical protagonists, this novel would be a pleasure to anyone who enjoys reading romance tropes in writing. Nevertheless, if you update more consistently then this book definitely has the potential to shine. Good luck, author!
I think this novel is actually really good. The synopsis is really long but it is a very good synopsis which hooks the reader in very well and fulfils its promises. The story is very well written and the characters are fleshed out to a very good degree. I really recommend this book to anyone who is interested in this genre.
