Reviews of Living my life in another world!

Shameless author's review here!! This is my first novel and my first time trying to write one. If you guys could, I would love to know what you have thought about my novel so far, so that I can try to improve and to see if it's worth to continue! Thank you! ^-^

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.