Important (Please Check Out If You're A New Reader)

To cut to the chase, what I want most new readers to know is that this novel is and will continue to be under a revision process. However, I'm not just going to delete everything and start anew. Since the story will remain the same and all I'll be doing is polishing it up to my level after nearly a year of improvement, I'm going to keep my old — and self admittedly bad — writing until the newly revised chapters are up.

So, the process I've elected to roll with will go like this. All chapters that you don't find end with "Revised" are in their original unpolished state. Chapters ending with "Revised" will have been re-edited by me to correct grammar, improve dialogue, and maybe even add in minor details. I'm not going to be adding anything that someone caught up to the current chapters wouldn't know, just things that will make the reading less... unreadable.

Additionally, after all the chapters in a book are finished, I'll use some part of the p@treon money I've earned over the last couple months to get professional editors to make the book as good as it can be. Here's where I would like to express my gratitude to all the people in the comment section and on p@treon who point out mistakes, but at the very least I want to see how much the book may improve with some professional help.

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