DarkRay
In my opinion this is one of the best original novels on this site. Its a rare original novel with content thats original wich is hard to find with so many fanfic novels or wuxia/xianxia plot copy pastas, It has superp worldbuilding as well as character design. The story is a little bit slow but shines with well thought out plots with little to no holes. Furthermore updates are mostly stable. Also i rarely find any grammar or writing errors. All things considered i love this novel and want to recommend it to anyone that doesnt just want to pass time but wants to read a story with quality content.
For those who don't like slow paced novels then this probably isn't for you, what i would advise though is atleast give it to chapter 36, as this was the chapter that i finally decided to add this novel onto my read list. They story is perfectly paced in my opinion, though when i started i had some doubts. I love the main character and i love how most of the characters are explained. some might say the author isn't giving us much to go on but we are seeing the world through the eyes of the MC, It drives me insane when novels included the view of other people because it ruins the world and surprise when things happen. keep up the good work and i highly recommend this novel
This book is absolutely amazing, It is the kind of book I would expect to see in a bookstore with its own little booth as a new New York Times best selling novel. The world development is amazing and in depth with just the right amount of mystery. The characters all have their own unique feel that makes you care for them and in addition different characters experience a good amount of character growth throughout the series that truly adds to the depth and realism of the world. And the story is absolutely amazing. This novel is something I would highly recommend to every reader on here.
This is to explain some things as I don't want to make synopsis too long. First - this novel is not a system novel that you will find everywhere now. This will never be a system novel and so if you think it is then you can stop reading. It's not. Second - The story starts slow and there is a reason to that. I want to describe as much as I can in this novel so although there will be some time skips (especially when there are repeated tasks) I don't want to write the same thing all the time too. Third - This story is not about revenge. The title says what it is about. There will be revenge parts in this story as well as love, hate, betrayal, greed and so on. why? you may ask. Because it is part of human nature and limits are part of human existence. This is a novel about human life not about saints and gods. There will be struggle because every human has a struggle in their life. So if you don't like these points, you may straight ahead drop it because you will not like it. There will be action, fights, plots etc but at a slower pace compared to OP characters where they get everything by luck or out of thin air. Humans have to work hard for their achievements and if you agree, then you will like this novel. By the way I didn't give myself 5 stars because there is always room for improvement with my novel. Thanks for reading and I hope some of you will enjoy my novel.
So far I love this novel sure it starts out a little slow but its suppose to be based on a actual story so it pans out. The only somewhat of a “flaw” if you can call it that is we really nothing about the outside world but that will probably be fixed in later chapters. If you like books with a lot of chapter development than this is the novel for you.I really hope the author finishes it and doesn’t drop
Second - The story starts slow and there is a reason to that. I want to describe as much as I can in this novel so although there will be some time skips (especially when there are repeated tasks) I don't want to write the same thing all the time too. 150 chapters the MC is still training... this is not a slow start even Shelly is faster than the story.. it will be boring if this continues
I would, say this one was an emotional rollercoaster, it had me reading everyday. I came looking for copper but i found gold. It turned to actually having a serious character not without flaws. But with normal human flaws not the endless stupidity flaw so many MC seem to have now a days. It feels like the story takes itself serious. He isnt given anything without working for it, or almost dying for it. He is good at things, but only because of practice. Not dumb luck. Biggest plus, no harem. So you can read it in peace. Hope this help you guys out there decide.
This is a perfect example of a hidden gem. The quality of the writing, the character and story development. If finally the update frequency makes it a great novel that don’t deserve its low ranking. While it may have slow progression, I personal enjoy that because it allows you to see how the Mc slowly transforms over time.