midnight_bloom
Well it's no surprise I just can't say no to a romance story, and this one was a good surprise! The setting is pretty good, but what makes this story shine to me is it's characters, that are funny, engaging and well written. Another good point is the very good grammar, with no mistakes, that I took notice of. All in all quite the good read and I advice you to give it a try!
The relationship's dynamic between the two main characters is some -if not the strongest- point in your novel, author. Being so different yet complementing each other so much; you sure are no rookie when it comes to describing human relationships and interactions. The same goes for character building; you succeeded to make them feel human and authentic. Few sometimes you use apostrophes instead of quotation marks and mix grammatical tenses, but nothing horrid nor anything that makes the work unreadable, (Compared to lots of works on this platform.) It's a cute and engaging story. Not your typical cliché of CEOs and bad boys. You managed to make me feel, stirred? Lol. Good job. Keep on it.
I haven't read your initial work, but I enjoy the pacing of the early writing in this story. The children are accurate in how vicious they can be, unintentionally. While romance-at-the-forefront is not my typical jam, I think the subtlety you provide makes for an easy crossover for readers like myself. Please keep up the good work, author!
The book is really good. The story line is refreshing and honestly I'm in love with the main characters relationship. Your writing skills are awesome. Can't wait to read more!! I love how the genre is not the same CEO and employee story. Every human relationship is portrayed beautifully. Keep up the good work author!!!