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midnight_bloom
midnight_bloomAuthormidnight_bloom

Author here! πŸ€— (shameless plug) This is my second novel after Milady's Fine Gentleman. Unlike the first one which is more plot-driven, Light Years Away is character-driven. That being said, there's no life threatening scenarios and it's more in the internal journeys of the characters. On that note, it inclines on a slow-burn romance also. More than just sweet love and romance, the story tackles resolving issues, past grudges and moving on to a more positivity-filled future and life. Just want to say at this point, I don't think there will be explicit smut in here. Just a little bit teasing. LOL. I know I have more to learn and readers can tell. I know I cannot please everyone, but I welcome constructive criticism. Please feel free to let me know how your humble author can still improve. I'm looking forward to readers' comments. Your support is much needed too. Please let me know once in a while that I'm not alone. LOL. I'm ok with a simple hi in the comments section. Thank you! Love you guys. xoxo

kavel_rie
kavel_rieLv4kavel_rie

It's just starting but so far it is showing good character developnent. The characters are adorable. Looking forward to more chapters!! πŸ₯°πŸ˜πŸ˜˜

mmmmmttttt
mmmmmtttttLv3mmmmmttttt

Interesting plot. Not the usual CEO story, more on family ties. The story has only started so the plot is still building up. Came from author's first novel. Fell in love with the characrers there. πŸ€— expecting same caliber with this story. I will give a review again when the plot thickens. Gambatte author-san!!

Babe00
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Hendinklette
HendinkletteLv2Hendinklette

I never was able to get into this genre of story, but i found the plot and characters very engaging. Your writing style is interesting and I've yet to find any pace stumping grammatical errors. A great read!

Scriptamagina
ScriptamaginaLv1Scriptamagina

hello Author! Good job! Why? I feel the characters emotion, I'm loving your story and it has a good plot. Keep on writing![img=coins][img=update]

sharrnister
sharrnisterLv2sharrnister

Hi Author! Overall, your story is entertaining and interesting, I love your writing quality so much and that makes it even good, characters are also well intricately design, Great job! Keep writing more :D 'rs' I hope you'll take a look at my story too and a feedback tysm!

Noleafyet
NoleafyetLv4Noleafyet

This is an interestingly sweet read. A smooth and light read. A goodie! Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and even earn more.

chelsearaenavy
chelsearaenavyLv1chelsearaenavy

Good book, the storyline keeps you hooked. It is a romance novel,yet interesting enough to keep you reading despite the many chapters without getting bored.

JunkiWDipreshun
JunkiWDipreshunLv1JunkiWDipreshun

Awesome story, no complaints. Cute with a lot of fizzy feelings but since I'm not exactly into CEO stories, I can't exactly nitpick with it. But what I can say is that even though I don't like these kinds of stories, I couldn't help but keep reading which speaks in itself of how good the story is. I hope you don't drop it, Author.

LittleMsNightmare
LittleMsNightmareLv1LittleMsNightmare

There's a lot to like about this book, starting with the relationship between the two main characters, who appear to be friends with a backstory. Loving how subtle the writing is. Yes, may be a "slow burn" but maybe we need a break from something happening the the MCs every dang second. Why can't they just exist and go through normal ***** experiences and why can't we just be okay with that? In conclusion: READ THIS BOOK!!

Nachetanya_Akira
Nachetanya_AkiraLv3Nachetanya_Akira

I love the plot of the story, I was hooked up just reading the sypnosis so it's no wonder that I liked the chapters as well, What I love about this is that the author did a great job telling the readers the every bits of the scenes, I highly recommend!! Ya'll have to read this^^

Shionokami
ShionokamiLv1Shionokami

Well it's no surprise I just can't say no to a romance story, and this one was a good surprise! The setting is pretty good, but what makes this story shine to me is it's characters, that are funny, engaging and well written. Another good point is the very good grammar, with no mistakes, that I took notice of. All in all quite the good read and I advice you to give it a try!

madskie00017
madskie00017Lv3madskie00017

Reading this story, I enjoyed every bits of it. It is worth my time! I hope everyone could read this as well. The Author is amazing in story-telling. Great Plot development and pacing. It is a must-read! 10/10

worriless_niemmy
worriless_niemmyLv5worriless_niemmy

Well thought out concept and descriptively designed plot, humorous and creative. Characters are sketched out finely. The novel is interesting and intriguing. Good work author!

devilDestroyer
devilDestroyerLv1devilDestroyer

An interesting premise. The characters are well described and written. Good job on the book. I wish you the best on your book author πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

AxlSLL
AxlSLLLv1AxlSLL

The relationship's dynamic between the two main characters is some -if not the strongest- point in your novel, author. Being so different yet complementing each other so much; you sure are no rookie when it comes to describing human relationships and interactions. The same goes for character building; you succeeded to make them feel human and authentic. Few sometimes you use apostrophes instead of quotation marks and mix grammatical tenses, but nothing horrid nor anything that makes the work unreadable, (Compared to lots of works on this platform.) It's a cute and engaging story. Not your typical clichΓ© of CEOs and bad boys. You managed to make me feel, stirred? Lol. Good job. Keep on it.

Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicLv2Alpha_Medic

I haven't read your initial work, but I enjoy the pacing of the early writing in this story. The children are accurate in how vicious they can be, unintentionally. While romance-at-the-forefront is not my typical jam, I think the subtlety you provide makes for an easy crossover for readers like myself. Please keep up the good work, author!

Jo_J
Jo_JLv3Jo_J

I just started to read that novel... The begging is interesting! It looks like the story line is also addictive ;) I will definitely read more.

TheElisse
TheElisseLv2TheElisse

I love it. The plot is so original. Not the usual "I started working for a CEO and now we are dating. Loving the relationship between two main characters. Definitely a book book worth reading