Black_Rabbit_Oz
You get 5 stars and I get exp that is the deal, no take backs.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hmm, I can't say anything about this novel actually... The concept of the novel is fine, and the grammar is not problem in here. This is your isekai novel right here, but this novel is a bit slow paced at the beginning, so you have to hold yourself and be patience before judging this book. Because if you've patience enough, you will unconsciously just press that next button over and over again. Well, I haven't keep up with this novel, so I want to do that after I write my first impression here, See ya!
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I initially started this webnovel because I saw it under the βPotential Startersβ section and tapped on it on accident. Quick notes on rating Writing Quality: 4/5 on writing quality, the only reason i put this is because there are some awkward sentences. However this is near the first 10 chapters and it doesnβt really affect the readability of the novel. Stability of Updating: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 Do not sleep on the potential of this novel so far. The intro is a bit slow and generic, but once MC gets isekai(ed) the story dramatically picks up. I would say the pacing of the novel is excellent. However powerscaling might seem like an issue. Idk yet, not that far in. OK.I just copy that for word count.Story looks cool so far,u blend in nicely system/rpg elements with fantays,which i love,big fan of litrpg. Most important.Where did u get that cover image,the guy with bows,so cooooool
I like this story and will continue to read this. Having a main character that actually acts "normal" (as normal as possible in a fantasy setting) makes him seem more human. It's definitely better compared to other novels with this setting. However, the writing style seems a little... weird? I can't really put my finger on it. I think it's the combination of some grammar mistakes, the persistant talk in third person during conversations, the cutesy talk of his little helper, and maybe some other things, that make the story seem a little forced? I guess? Well, of course this is just my perception, but at least for me this makes it harder to read. Still a good story though π