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Spoiler Alert:Remember in Chapter 3, Michael and Williams were shot, the point is that they didn't die. In Chapter 25, Prince and co didn't survive after their bodies were restricted from escape. Introducing 5 other characters from 5 different countries:USA,India, China, Korea, and Philippine as the 10 of them will have to survive or die in a horror state of coma, if they die in this horror state of coma, they die in real life. LIFE IN 2021 will end on December 31st, please keep reading and supporting, I wish all chapters would be free but it's lockedπ yet the love am receiving from this book is too much, this is going to be the best book on Webnovel just like the Vampire System, I love you guys, I see you viewing, voting, reviewing, etc, only God will bless you for the little time you've spent on my story.
The Good: The writing quality is well done and we have a plethora of characters to read about. The Bad: What is going on in this story? The plot is so disjointed that I can't follow it. It reads more like a term paper than a novel. The grammar is surprisingly well done, but the actual structure needs a lot of work. I can't tell if the author is improving or not as the quality stays the same for all of the free chapters. Maybe they were all added at once? The s*x scene made me giggle and I don't think that was intentional. The Neutral: Not much of a horror or thriller, but that might be in the later chapters that are locked behind premium. What I am having the most difficult time with is following where the plot is going. I feel like it is just a list of things that are happening without much else. Regardless, read your work out loud and you will catch many of the issues with readability. While the character descriptions are great, the world still feels empty. Is this meant to be a biography of sorts?
Chapter 28 ending and chapter 29 was so scary, the scenes haven't left me up till now, l can wait for more horror chapters, I love this book π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€
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I dont even know where to start with this review. The writing is solid, yes. the character descriptions are okay but this is very confusing. The book is under horror and thriller but there is zero horror and thriller inside it. There speech pattern sometimes made zero sense. The first chapter had me very worried, you claim to be a Nigerian but your description and demoralization of the country you live in was very concerning, especially with the fact that the book is written in an international platform It shows a lack of patriotism, openly dismissing your country then trying to cover it up by degrading another country was a bit sad to me Then america, you quickly assumed the living conditions there, in a way slandering it. Still very concerning I also noticed you dropping your bank information in the comment section? is that allowed? I honestly thought i would get horror from this but i was very disappointed
I realy liked the conversation at the start between the friends about their lives in the future, it seems like a real conversation that most people have at that age. I also admire how the main character doesn't just want the stereotypical American dream. My main criticism is the grammar and spelling could use some work. I also feel like writing that you agree with the quote the you mentioned felt a bit unecessary. Still, its a good job.
I don't know where to start. I find the premise quite promising, the characters and writings is definitely well thought of. Grammar and all. There thing is I couldn't yet to find any suspense horror feels yet. Perhaps it's one of the author decision to unravel it later on. Overall, it's a good read. Will def keep tab on this one.