Reviews of Life Hunter
Life Hunter
AhraManyu
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Hello... I don't know what I'm supposed to say in a review of my own novel! Why do I need to write at least 140 characters ?! Well, like I said above, this novel is something that came out from young me's head but I didn't do much at that time. Like, enough to fill 2 chapters? You see the picture. In the end I decided to pick this not even started work and continue it. I already thought of how the history will go, I already revealed a bit in the synopsis. Sooo, yeah. If this novel survive, somehow, enough to include all the different fantasies in my head then I think I'll be proud of myself. The END.
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It was good until the academy arc, it ticks me off when he just accept everyone request like he’s their slave. Especially to the girls, he was supposed to be a veteran and smart but this whole arc prove that he’s stupid. Like, he knows that gods will be chasing for his life and what does he do? Fcking teach a strangers because apparently he was “bored”. Then after that i thought it’s gonna be good again, but no. The author decided that the mc should accept everyone request like a retard without any benefits. And the most stupid thing is that he hold back against cerberus who could destroy the world because cerberus power was reduce since he’s not in hell, so he decided that he’ll be fair and decrease his power as well so they could fight fairly, like how stupid is that? That fcking dog could kill and destroy your love ones and you fcking fight fairly? Because what? Because dog shtt! I dropped it after that because he literally turn to slave, accept everyone task without benefits, says that woman are scary when we all full know that he’s the strongest, and some stupid sht. I’m outy
This kind of story is really my favourite! The kind of story with OP mc. The writing quality is good but sometimes there's a bit of misspelled of word in a chapter anyway it's just like about one word in a chapter from 1-3 chapter in between. For the updates, that I don't know because I have just discovered this hidden gem and like always binge read xD. The development of the story is kind of fast paced but it just suited for this kind of OP MC so it's acceptable. The character design... Hmm... I think you make a great job on it. The world background is passable. That's all. Thank you. Keep up the good work and I hope it will be one of the best.
It's a decent story for someone to have as a first read. It's got flaws, but not enough to make me angry, just disappointed. Starts like it's going to be a ****ty Isekai, then it gets better, more interesting, then it starts to show that it wants to force romance on us down the line when it really wouldn't suit the overall tone, then the sword gets turned into a woman and the author says it's going to be in a relationship with someone that's not the mc because the love interest for the mc is most likely going to be lenya and this isn't a harem novel (thank fucking god). Could be worse, but overall, not my cup of tea.
I've read this novel since the beginning of it's creation and it blows my mind on how this much world building, backstory lore, and concrete plot is only ranked sub 100 among these other garbage novels in comparison to this master piece. This is by far the best hidden gem of novels I have read since moving to Qidian. 5/5 every chapter, every arc.
The story isn't a terrible one but unfortunately the writing doesn't carry it across- this is due to a combination of mistakes in word choice and grammar as well as a general lack of understanding of the meanings of words. If you love reading MTL books for some reason, it should work for you but otherwise I would suggest you steer clear. If the author gets an editor and re-writes the chapters, I may re-review.
3☆ for writing quality since it still has some mistake 5☆ for updating 2☆ for development 1☆ for charactor design 2☆ for world background This is a readable novel writen in japanese style which love to **** the logic then and there, a lot of plot hole happened because of that. The MC doesn't have any charactor any killer have to be except for being cold and also looks more like a fomal type of justice protector MC in other novel.
I'm currently only ten chapters in, but I've already noticed some patterns that could be improved, especially in terms of writing quality. The big one for me is heavy use of passive voice eg: this character did instead of character said... Using a lot of existance verbs: did, was, is, will. I know the author isn't a native English speaker (I think) and this is a bit more nuanced then general English, but if he cut this out then his writing could be much better. This story isn't particularly unique, but it is still captivating and I'm enjoying it quite a lot. The main character is super generic, but it's still fun to read. A few of the author notes acknowledge his silly ideas and generic plot points, and to paraphrase him- what does it matter as long as it's awesome. I like this philosophy, and feel like this goes against the grain of other authors on this site who get mired down trying to explain away why their ideas aren't stupid. This authors strength lies in the fact that he gives enough detail to feel emersed and not so much that you stop feeling emersed. This author clearly has room for improvement but is definitely worth the read.
