Riviz
I Really Hate this kind of Synopsis, when you read this kind of Synopsis it gives you nothing absolutely nothing about what in the novel. I Really Hate this kind of Synopsis, when you read this kind of Synopsis it gives you nothing absolutely nothing about what in the novel. I Really Hate this kind of Synopsis, when you read this kind of Synopsis it gives you nothing absolutely nothing about what in the novel.
MC is like a Japanese MC, beta cuck. Made it to chap 80. Also there isn’t an editor, if there is, it’s a terrible one. And since I need to meet the character limit to post, here is a bunch of periods since the author doesn’t use them.........................................................................................................................
I have been enjoying this novel. The plot is pretty good, and the main character isn't brainless, and instead makes intelligent decisions. The writing itself is pretty good, though there is the occasional grammatical error, overall it is written well. The story isn't to slow, and proceeds at a good pace. I would recommend reading this novel.
If you are looking for near nonstop action and don’t care about quality then this is the story for you. The synopsis as everyone says is nowhere close to accurate, there are numerous basic spelling errors though only for certain words, and the characters not the mc don’t have much in the way of development. All of but two characters start defaulting to fear and anger if they are even slightly weaker then Derik the mc. Also, names get mixed up occasionally.
so I honestly gave this a thorough try. several times I was told the start is weird but it gets better. it doesnt. it's like torture. mc powers up, gets arrogant, loses. again and again. even when he is supposed to win cause he is more powerful he somehow loses. the mc doesnt kill women and if they're just somewhat pretty he falls for them immediately for no reason. if you're into constant pointless fights the mc loses and an mc who constantly simps plus bad writing, plot development and grammar then this is the story for you. some plusses. the world seems cool. that's about it. when people tell you it gets better don't trust them. it peaked at the first fight.