Dumpling_Aunt
Another Female Protagonist, this is the second time. Honestly, I love stories about Cultivation and Overpowered Protagonist, the although I'm not fond of female protagonist, I know I'm a bit Gender Bias and I'm sorry about it, but I can't take it out of my Personality, Maybe because I'm a Male. At first I really don't want to read it, but as the story goes on, other than female protagonist the overpowered is there. I Love the story after reading more than 5 Chapters, I'm looking forward for an Update, I'm thinking about the Protagonist, Silver Hair, Kawaii! In an Anime I love silver hair Girls. . . Mind you, Although my own story is not that Awesome, I'm also a type of person not easy to pique the interest of others work, Once I feel dissatisfied, I will leave Immediately, and why I telling it, because if I give you a high evaluation, It means I really like your story, and what? I also leave a review, Nice one Author. Keep the good work Author..
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What collection? Obviously add it to your library fool.
Very interesting story so far~ the Lim Su Ren and White Flame interactions are adorable! I'm hoping for more of those. Nevertheless, the grammar and punctuation, and the story setting (like describing the room where the characters are for example) could do more improvements so to give more depth. Overall, the flow and pacing is good and it's fun to read~
It's been an interesting ride so far! It's always entertaining to see a sassy, modern-age girl being transported into these worlds where power is king, especially when they get enough power themselves to shake the heavens. Lim Su Ren's story is just starting out but she's got a few tricks so far that definitely make it seem like she'll be making waves soon. A very fun ride