Daoist_zero950
Author please for the love of god change this stupid statistics that you wrote for yuno.Do you even know how levels work in legends of heroes.please do some research.Hes level 45 yet he isent even as strong as rean. Author you gave the charachter statistics from no lower then 5 to 10 when he wasent even burn yet.If this isent nerfing the mc then I don't even know what is any more. And author I'm not writing bad comments to reject or dispirit you But so you can improve on the already great work that you've done. Great charachter interaction,good choice of plot one that I've personally never seen on the platform.Good wishes that are relevant to the plot and that make god damn sense,and not something exaggerated like super saiyn bloodline and what not. As an author a little bit more research and refrecing on the way things our about the world you writing goes a long way to create a beter novel people will enjoy and can't wait to read or wait till the next chapter to upload.
Alright, I've been reading this for quite a while now and as it is at 9 reviews, I decided to write my own impression. As it stands right now (chapter 12) it is right near the beginning of the first cold steel game, so the story doesn't rush through the plot, but rather gives the reader time to get to know the original character and it allows the author to slowly show and develop the relationship between the main character and the rest of class VII. the main character himself is not a cocky, self-centered asshole, rather he knows when to stand his ground and when to give in. Furthermore he is strong, but not overly so, which makes him a good fit for the role he is supposed to fulfill, he can influence the plot heavily, but he can't flip the whole board his his own power. Last but not least, even though the main character has influenced part of the main cast before the canon plot begins, their characteristics and mannerism feel natural and not strongly influenced by the author. This makes this novel for a good read for any "The Legend of Heroes - Trails of Cold Steel" player.
This is well done and well thought out. I really would like to see more chapters to come out soon and that this story is not dead. I am enjoying how you have got this set up so far, maybe in secret Yuno could make a tachi from steel reinforced with magic for when Rean gets Valimar. Also Waterfall Quartz is godly :D
pls continue that's all what can i say..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................please XD