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Reviews of Legend of Argo: The thrill seeker

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Legend of Argo: The thrill seeker

Darkhe_Prince

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Lexi_Roberson
Lexi_RobersonLv1Lexi_Roberson

Hello! I absolutely loved the first chapter! I was very engaged and loved the way Alex said things sarcastically. I couldn't help but laugh, especially when you added the "Note:" comments, it was hilarious. You are doing an amazing job, keep it up, and I look forward to more updates. Happy Writing. -Popsicle_Jellyfish

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Easy_Tiger
Easy_TigerLv1Easy_Tiger

Great start to the story. Moves at a great place and explains things on the run to avoid excessive info dumps. The protagonist Argo is a funny dude that you want to cheer for through his numerous conflicts and complications. The prose is high quality and broken up nicely into small paragraphs for ease of reading on phones and tablets. Solid stuff from the author so far. Let's see where it all goes from here.

Darkhe_Prince
Darkhe_PrinceAuthorDarkhe_Prince

Shameless author review. This is my very first novel and there's bound to be some mistakes here and there but I assure you that the novel is totally worth it. Just give it a try. Criticism and advices are highly welcome. Enjoy.

Darkhe_Prince
Darkhe_PrinceAuthorDarkhe_Prince

Why don't you just try it?? This novel is sure to captivate you... Please make sure to leave comments and reviews😉😉 Legend of Argo: The thrill seeker

MichaelJustin
MichaelJustinLv3MichaelJustin

Great novel funny MC and characters Great work TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT TEXT

Mha_Vel
Mha_VelLv2Mha_Vel

This is a great novel by an upcoming Author, the writing quality is really good and there is barely an mistake made. Also the story development and character design are well thought out. the only bad thing is that the stability of updates is a bit poor. I hope the author will remedy this, Thanks and good job.

maxgonz
maxgonzLv12maxgonz

Ok so read to chapter 20. From what I've read this is honestly a decent read so far. The only criticism/hopes for future changes, I'd give is for one don't make MC a slave to the system as that is really annoying (that being said that hasn't happened yet but I just hope you don't do that in the future), secondly please don't make MC a simp as he has been, like for example where he called out his friend for hitting the woman or gifting a gun to a random chick who he thinks is hot like wtf.. and that's about it. If you can try to be consistent and keep on writing and I'm sure your fanbase will grow! Good work.

SomethingLikeDeSun
SomethingLikeDeSunLv2SomethingLikeDeSun

Did not expect to like the story as much as I do based on the synopsis but the story quickly proved me wrong. 10/10 very well written novel. I love the mystery and suspense. This is my first novel from this author but I cannot wait to see the full reveal by the end of the book.

phoenixhyperion
phoenixhyperionLv13phoenixhyperion

Just so you know, I like your protagonist. And his sidekick system (allow me to name it that), it's fun and engaging and..well, it's pretty much refreshing to see an author described a transmigration novel with a tinge of humor. Unlike other novels that solely focus on describing and informing stuff, it's kind of fun to add a bit of entertainment, eh? Thumbs up to you author! Keep up the good work!

Mystic_Dragon_
Mystic_Dragon_Lv2Mystic_Dragon_

A real good book , it would be great to have more chapters ... Nice humor , love it in a serious plot !! And it sure is very interesting . Keep writing !!

emzzy_knight
emzzy_knightLv3emzzy_knight

I haven't even read the book but I am giving it a 5 star rating due to the fact that the author is actually from my country. Keep it up.👍👍👍

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Aeipathy_02
Aeipathy_02Lv11Aeipathy_02

This story is great! Though it has a generic system theme, but I absolutely like the mc's system. Lol! That system has really some attitude and way too funny. Overall this story is nice!!! If your a fan of a system story which I'm also one then this story is definitely for you! Keep it up author!!!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Hello! I really love the novel! especially it was a system! But I would like to point out some improvements! I noticed that at the first parts, there was a first person point of view but on the last parts, it changed to third person point of view. I suggest to stick to one or someday, someone will point it out on you. So I liked the story! and I hope it will improve in the future! You have talent and you have a story to tell so good luck!

Gaureeey
GaureeeyLv1Gaureeey

Writing quality,-perfect for the type of character and story you're writing, it keeps the reader interested without giving too much away. Stability of updates doesn't matter lol. Story development Is good so far a much as I've read, character-protagonist-Alexx is a very bold character and reminds me of the witcher lol and you've built the world impressively

Faysal_Ahmed_5058
Faysal_Ahmed_5058Lv2Faysal_Ahmed_5058

Read only a few chapter. But the story captivated me especially the Mc. He is funny, cool. Great first chapter. Great protagonist. The system is good but for me it needs work. I feel it is missing something. But that just me being delusional. Good luck to the author. I enjoyed reading the novel.

DarkseidEquation
DarkseidEquationLv1DarkseidEquation

The battle and world system is very interesting and would like to see it much more expanded on more. The main character has many intriguing traits too.