Darkhe_Prince
Hello! I absolutely loved the first chapter! I was very engaged and loved the way Alex said things sarcastically. I couldn't help but laugh, especially when you added the "Note:" comments, it was hilarious. You are doing an amazing job, keep it up, and I look forward to more updates. Happy Writing. -Popsicle_Jellyfish
Great start to the story. Moves at a great place and explains things on the run to avoid excessive info dumps. The protagonist Argo is a funny dude that you want to cheer for through his numerous conflicts and complications. The prose is high quality and broken up nicely into small paragraphs for ease of reading on phones and tablets. Solid stuff from the author so far. Let's see where it all goes from here.
This is a great novel by an upcoming Author, the writing quality is really good and there is barely an mistake made. Also the story development and character design are well thought out. the only bad thing is that the stability of updates is a bit poor. I hope the author will remedy this, Thanks and good job.
Ok so read to chapter 20. From what I've read this is honestly a decent read so far. The only criticism/hopes for future changes, I'd give is for one don't make MC a slave to the system as that is really annoying (that being said that hasn't happened yet but I just hope you don't do that in the future), secondly please don't make MC a simp as he has been, like for example where he called out his friend for hitting the woman or gifting a gun to a random chick who he thinks is hot like wtf.. and that's about it. If you can try to be consistent and keep on writing and I'm sure your fanbase will grow! Good work.
Just so you know, I like your protagonist. And his sidekick system (allow me to name it that), it's fun and engaging and..well, it's pretty much refreshing to see an author described a transmigration novel with a tinge of humor. Unlike other novels that solely focus on describing and informing stuff, it's kind of fun to add a bit of entertainment, eh? Thumbs up to you author! Keep up the good work!
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Hello! I really love the novel! especially it was a system! But I would like to point out some improvements! I noticed that at the first parts, there was a first person point of view but on the last parts, it changed to third person point of view. I suggest to stick to one or someday, someone will point it out on you. So I liked the story! and I hope it will improve in the future! You have talent and you have a story to tell so good luck!
Writing quality,-perfect for the type of character and story you're writing, it keeps the reader interested without giving too much away. Stability of updates doesn't matter lol. Story development Is good so far a much as I've read, character-protagonist-Alexx is a very bold character and reminds me of the witcher lol and you've built the world impressively