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dropping I hate the plot that the MC has a super cool family and they don't help him get strong or talk about how the world works and there are monsters etc while all the other families help each other it's just something I can't understand if the other families help their children because the MC who has a great family doesn't get help and yes there probably must be some reason but I still think it's stupid I hate this plot because of other novels, this is a personal preference but other than that the story is good
okay, people who say that writing quality is awsome i must ask how can you think that? the story seems great but the writing can be so confusing at times. like he was fighting two goblins and they both jumped at him the first one he grabbed and he was moving around wildly then so the second one lessened not lost lessened it's grip because at some point it grabbed him then it says that the second goblin also jumped at him like what? there are more things but it's not worth writing any more of them if for some reason decide to read this then you will notice them. And I will say I could let this slide if the writer was not a native speaker but he is so I can't let it slide
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