Reviews of LEEK THE SAIYAJIN

Thanks for the comments and advice, they will help me to better develop this novel and my skills. since this is my first time writing a novel and it is part of a school project, but I would like my novel to become interesting and polish it over time and its advice, I don't speak English my English classes will start next year… thanks for your comprehension

dude...pls fix the structure atleast, its hard to read.....the grammar is messed upto but I suppose english aint your main lang so try to improve but damn man the structure is all ****ed up...couldnt understand ****....ex: did the ex-bestfriend sleep with MC's mom or is it vise versa?, couldn't understand what happened there.....point is, try atleast fix the grammer

this is a really good story keep up the good work plz dont drop or hiatus i want to keep reading this. ................................................