1 the Wormal things people do

A thousand years ago before society began there was these three elements who are suppose to be an...

"Do I really need to this jit? aren't people tired of this origin story stuff? so f^ing cliche'!? Can i curse? no? because kids will read this? f*** em ki--------Sorry I wont do it again

okay, okay I'll continue me will stop giving my opinion oh God I hate you~"

A thousand blah blah blah in short there is these things that make things what they are

this is the things that makes the title of the novel what it is so let's just get on with this story! I just want to get on my part already! Bahahaha!!

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Somewhere in the Philippines, Manila city

"Vrrmmmm!!!...."

A silhouette of a person came to vision lean, tall,....

["pfftt!! what the hell is with these descriptions makes want to gag or something let me do the work"]

A fat tall dude who looks around 16 to 17 years old came to sight and if you get near and look at his face closer you can see his acne scar and pimple and stuff...

["now that is the description.. that's more realistic "]

sitting on his lonely ass chair watching some kind of anime or something

["what a nerd"]

unknowingly his screen flickered

emotionlessly didn't do anything about it as if it was normal thing that it happened

but what happen next will shock the hell out of King Yama!

*Boooommmm!!* A huge rock came out of nowhere and just descended to the house where the fat guy lived in...

The house turned to a massive hole and debris

the impact of the rock created a dense sand of clouds that makes your lungs suffocate

on the center of the chaos once the fog cleared up

there imerge a tall youth around the age of 16-17

["PS.. this is my bud or going to me my bud and he's the main character"]

I dont the next